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I'm so lazy and unmotivated that the stories in my head were not given justice. I hope i get through it!

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He's not indebted to help. Why do people expects other people to help you in times of need and get angry if they did not help. It's not their business. They are also not responsible to help you.

The umbrella that she held flew out of her hand, and her other hand reached toward the man. The man tilted his head, and soon Eve's bottom kissed the ground.

Allure Of The Night

Allure Of The Night

Fantasy · ash_knight17

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To be honest, this started good and it gave the impression that this was not written by a stupid author who just copies everything out there. It has logic, sense and stability in the first 200 chapters, I just don't know what happened after it. It all falls downhill in the entertainment arc. It started to feel dumb. It now became a face slapping scenes and it was not even made decently. There are moments that are cringey because they are highly unrealistic. Everyone started to be one dimensional character and the way they act and even their lines are looking the same. Some people don't even have distinct characters anymore. Like they are male but their lines and the way they speak sounds similar to those cannon fodder female characters. Also, the plot starts to convulate and be stagnant. There came the mistakenly exchanged kids trope and it was done very crudely. Just because someone saw that you look like their granma, they decided to do a dna. Its more like because they needed more plot armor for her. I didn't even know the reason why she has to be an actress when she's better at other things and she wanted to make money. Acting gives little money and it will took her 4 months to finish which is so OOC for her. She can use that time to create an empire, there's no legitimate reason why entertainment arc should proceed from this story other than the author has some wish fulfillment fetish to make her/his character famous and the only way she/he can think of was the dumb entertainment arc. I thought this book was smart and at least mature in its operation but I have a feeling that it change authors after the 200th chapter. It's sad, I at least was expecting a lot from this.

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This a review full of complaints First of all, for a story that complains almost the main characters and their kids to be geniuses the story and character execution seems dumb to me. The amount of misunderstanding that even a simpleton could have guess at was stretch so much that the characters now seem dumb despite the fact that they were geniuses. They're not dumb actually but there are more smarter stories out there with MCs that never claims to be geniuses but the things they do, their thought processes and actions constitutes a smart move. While this book like to fish more chapter through absurd words of stupid reason and chances where the author can justify why the misunderstanding or mystery was still not apparent to the characters. It was actually okay at the start as the mystery and amount of misunderstanding can be a good plot to read but when it spans for hundreds of chapters of stupid reasons and chances, the book quality suffers. It might be okay if they are just normal simple people but they are abnormally genius people, that's what was written by the author. Sadly, they are not acting like it. The worst part is when around the 150th chapters, the author just stops to create reason and just let the characters act like an actual fool who was so oblivious to the obvious signs that was glaring in shining letters in front of them. Really disappointing. It really lowers the credibility of the story. Sigh. I didn't even sleep till it was 1 PM in the afternoon just to read the first chapters. I read this as 4 am which was near my sleeping time. The start was promising but it gone downhill afterwards. Also, the MC just became uncaring with her daughter and sons after she knew about the existence of her son, like all she did was sleep and spend less time and effort to care to them. Which was not the case from the early chapters, she was a loving and caring mother there but the author neglects her. Don't even talk about the romance. It was unconvincing and very disappointing. If the author does not focus on faceslapping that spans from tens of chapters to chapters, the romance part could have been made properly. The author suddenly decided to just let them feel in love with each other without sufficient backing of it. Like the author realizes that she forgot the mc as a mother and has a lovelife and just botched some chapters to fill this hole. DISSAPONTING. I'm thinking of dropping it. It's decided, Im gonna drop it already. It brought dissatisfaction and frustration than the joy and thrill when I was reading it's first chapters.

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The MC has a bad habit of punching or slapping people when she's angry with them. I mean I'm in the 800+ chapters and she never seems to grow out of this. Like she's 27 and technically these kids are in their 14 to 15 age. Instead of dealing with it in a smart way, she loves to deal with it in a physical way, no matter what the consequences are. They badmouted her, she thinks that they'll think she's weak and pushover so she punched or slapped them. Like she's the BEST businesswoman but she's not that logical, cunning and wise on her decision sometimes. Like I'm not gonna nag on her qualities as it's good to be imperfect and not a Mary Sue. But the title itself states that the Best Businesswoman, and how misleading that title is. In business aspect, she's not that good and she lacks the quality and traits of what a good leader and businessman should have. If she does not have Bai Zhou on her side, I don't think she'll ever be successful in real estate or entertainment business when she's not that quip to hold on to the mantle. indeed she's the best businesswoman as she's the only woman so far in the story that's doing business. But compared to businessMAN, she still needs more years to have the quality to be even compared with them. in terms of her leadership as a sect master, she's disappointing. She lacks the reward and punishment system. When they do something great she's hardly thankful for them and when they do stuff that betrays her order she hardly even punished them. She's not obligated cause this position was given to her, but she's using it so she should take responsibility. Aside from the disappointing MC, the story is okay

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It's good but to be honest I don't quite like the ml. I mean he's a nice guy but I would not date him if I were the FL. Like he's super rich and powerful but he's only focusing on their relationship and not on the life of the FL. Like he can stomp those enemies of FL, but during his inauguration banquet, he invited both the 3 of them, then it lead to the FL being bullied and schemed during his OWN banquet. Like has he no control with that? This three nearly drove her Grandma and FL down then threatened the life of FL but no, he still invited them and now the FL is hurting and was bullied. The FL hates her stepsis but the ML company still took her for an advertisement. He has the power to atleast pressure their own companies but he never did and now the FL was always schemed and hurt by these has-no-problem enemies. I know he's not obligated that's why I don't hate him and I know that it's better for the FL to stand on her own and defend herself. But if I have a Girlfriend the same as the FL, I will not let go of these perpetrators that hurt my love and I will do things to pressure them so they can't hurt her anymore. Because that's how love works, you care for the wellbeing for your partner and you will try to help her so that she will not be hurt anymore and knowingly he saw how helpless and vulnerable the FL was all the time because of them. He was indeed distressed and concerned about it but he made no action with it. I don't hate him because he didn't do anything wrong but I will not like him as a BF either. Like what's the use of the power you have if you can't use it to safeguard those you care about. GO FL! I'm still rooting for you.

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