HeavenlyYandereDao

I like the authors works enough to disregard the obvious Ai usage on all of them (even the ones on novelpia), but this one is just getting frustrating plot wise to the detriment of what I think is the best world this author has made Him not having picked up on Audra being the one hypnotizing him with her ring is just such a silly plot point. The last time his ring did something, it broke him free from a glamourkins influence, surely he should be able to connect the dots when it has started acting up again right after he doesn’t remember a few minutes, and Audra is always nearby. It’s really stupid and seems so forced, kinda like him deciding to hang around a shotacon in his child form for free food, seeing absolutely zero risk, and that ended up blowing up in his face spectacularly.

Holy peak There’s some grammar mistakes and wrong names here and there but not too big to really mess up the quality of the story World is unique even though it’s a cultivation story MC actually starts standing up for himself later on, after being somewhat frustrating in the beginning Xiao Ruolan best girl