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This type of story is not my cup of tea, but I can see the appeal to people who often indulge in reading stories with similar plot points. Personally, I really don't like the main character, but I can understand their intentions and motives. Your descriptions are decent enough, but I feel they could be enhanced through the use of slightly better grammar structure and a tad bit more pronouns. Overall, decent story for the genre. I hope you do well in the future.

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