This type of story is not my cup of tea, but I can see the appeal to people who often indulge in reading stories with similar plot points. Personally, I really don't like the main character, but I can understand their intentions and motives. Your descriptions are decent enough, but I feel they could be enhanced through the use of slightly better grammar structure and a tad bit more pronouns. Overall, decent story for the genre. I hope you do well in the future.
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What I love about this novel the most is how I'm depth the author guess with their characters, enough to give the towel main characters their own POV with each chapter. I love that speech of the writing style and even how the story progresses utilizing that very style of writing... It's just so unique and so interesting. The story was capable of piquing my interest and maintaining it to a certain degree so I'm proud to say this is something I can easily see myself reading through to the end.
Sunshine and Shadows
Realistic · Sphynx_99