Melissa_Harkess - Profile

Interesting story line however poor grammar, constant switches between third party and first party point of view even within same paragraph, and overuse of ellipsis instead of correct punctuation makes reading a challenge.

Interesting story so far however translation is spotty making it a challenging read. Characters genders keeps changing, often in the same paragraph going from he to she. Male leads name has been changed three times in 20 chapters.