I'm aware of what it looks like, but I'm guessing you aren't going to see a lot of people wearing one to a school. I could be wrong. Either way, it stood out to me as a bit much.
Today was her wedding day. No matter how dissatisfied her grandmother was with the marriage, she still prepared a red dress for her, which signified a happy life and a happy future. Her skin was fair so the red dress made her skin look even smoother. She looked extremely beautiful.
Urban · Wuxia
Color me envious. I have to admit, your first few chapters were a bit rough. The storytelling far outweighed the technical ability, but the farther the story progresses, the better the writing. Congrats. a lot of writers don't improve so quickly.
ch 52 Giving A Slap In The Face With Facts
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See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
ch 0 7 Luke Butts In
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Lovely chapter. Thank you.
ch 47 You've Done It
Urban · Wuxia
Moving chapter. Thank you.
ch 45 Shall We Give It a Try?
Urban · Wuxia
So much gang mentality.
ch 44 Let's Have a Good Talk
Urban · Wuxia
This chapter was kind of a letdown after the last few, but in the grand scheme, breather chapters are necessary to build tension for the next big thing.
ch 42 Sisters Fighting For Attention
Urban · Wuxia
Kind of getting tired of being reminded of her background by now. It has been beaten into me. Aside from that, still loving the story. Thank you for sharing.
She disliked her sister-in-law because Shen Hanxing came from a poor area and sounded petty and dirty. But after seeing Shen Hanxing... she hated the people around her who kept mocking her sister-in-law.
Urban · Wuxia
I've decided I don't want to be her friend! :)
She slapped his hand three times. Afterward, Shen Hanxing pressed the stick against his shoulder, her beautiful eyes were cold, and she said, "Xiao Yu, don't think that I don't know what you're thinking. If you dare to throw yourself in hell for the rest of your life in exchange for that little bit of money, don't blame me for disowning you."
Urban · Wuxia
It would be nice to know the ages of the people if it can be worked in somewhere.
Ji Mo was a refined and handsome young man. He wore his school uniform obediently and carried a backpack on his skinny back.
Urban · Wuxia
So she actually went to the school in her wedding dress? That sounds a little off, but I suppose if it were simple enough it could work.
Today was her wedding day. No matter how dissatisfied her grandmother was with the marriage, she still prepared a red dress for her, which signified a happy life and a happy future. Her skin was fair so the red dress made her skin look even smoother. She looked extremely beautiful.
Urban · Wuxia
See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola
ch 0 3 Lend Me Some Money
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ch 0 2 Hello, I'm Your wife, Shen Hanxing
Urban · Wuxia
Be nice to get a visual of what he considers vulgar.
Shen Yong did not like the way Shen Hanxing bared her fangs and brandished her claws towards him, so he berated her, "Look at your vulgar appearance. You don't look like my daughter at all!" He glared at Shen Hanxing. "But no matter what, I'm still your father. I still have to worry about your marriage. Since you're not going to school anymore, hurry up and pack your things. We're marrying you off in two days."
Urban · Wuxia
Vicious
Shen Hanxing slapped Jiang Jingqiu, and the smile on her lips became wider and wider. "Jiang Jingqiu, a mistress should have some self-awareness as a mistress. Don't wander around in front of me. After all, I have no father and no manners. If you anger me, I will beat you up regardless of who you are. When that time comes, don't blame me for your hurt pride."
Urban · Wuxia
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ch 10 Touch Me
One and Done
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