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ch 0 1 Chapter 1: I'm Mack
Video Games · Spaz_Dragon
I'll fix that in the future. Thank you
Please read in deeper I fix that mistake
ch 0 1 Chapter 1: I'm Mack
Video Games · Spaz_Dragon
thanks for the positive feedback and I'll be sure not to disappoint
ch 0 5 Chapter 5: Dragon Trainer
Video Games · Spaz_Dragon
Lacks world building but it still had a start but the premise of the story is interesting from what the author said in the first chapter and it has a lot of potential with a good first main character but he kind of grew into power fast but the pacing can be fixed. Overall the book is good but has potential to become great
Chronicles of The Heroes of Zenoria
Fantasy · Blackout_DaVinci