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this chapter needs proof reading her name is Richelle not Kiara

😆 😆 🤣 too funny!!!

It's really hard to read when the translation is not good. Especially with "my sister" expression! it's supposed to be your sister and it's said all the time by people talking to the sisters!!! And it's also confusing too.

I know this is an old story from 3 yrz ago, reading the comments but it doesn't matter, I'm a fan of this author, love your work, your stories are beautifu, love all the characters, the humor and all. Beautifully written, beautiful translation, a few mistakes, but nothing serious!!! Again love your work beautiful ending!!! I read a few of your work and by far you're my favorite author!!!

Love it!! Good storyline, love the power couple and the crazy funny circle of friends!!! I've read a few of your stories, love them all except one that you didn't finish, abandoned actually, but thanks for finishing this

Love this book, a bit confusing towards the end but overall I really loved it!!! it was nice to have an ending, I was worried that it might be cut off like other novels but instead you finished it!!! Thank you

it's a good story but it needs proof reading, the names keeps getting mixed up!!! instead of Shen, the author keeps using the Chen last name for the Shen fsmily

Thank you,for actually fi Islington the story and have a happy ending.. I was worried that this was gonna be abandoned like so many others I've read!!! So thank you and love love the storyline too and the characters.

Is the main character a female or male? I can't tell because you keep switching from "he" to "she" when talking about this person. it spoils the storyline and makes it so hard to read !!!

Again I'm confused, I thought Robinson was a male, because of the name Robinson and also the author refers to him as a he, although sometimes you refer to him as a she or her but now in this chapter she's choosing a dress to wear? So can you clarify if this character is a maleor female? your writing doesn't clarify and the name Robinson is a male name.

it's a good story line but my main complaint is the authors keeps switching the FL name from Daisy to Brown Olivia and to Lucia Everleigh? it is very confusing!!! in the beginning I had to go back and re read the chapters because I thought the author was talking about other female characters. it is very confusing!! even the male lead, in the same scenario , jumps from Arthur North and Kevin! Can you please stick to one name even if these are her hidden identities please use the name when she assuming that identity not when she's in a conversation with someone her name changes from Daisy Zane to Brown Olivia to LuciaEverleigh. It is a great story and I love it but this really affects the awesome storyline!

it's very confusing when you refer to the main characters as he when she's a female a d then the lead male appears and you refer to him as she. this just makes the story hard to read

I like it especially the fact that the author did have an ending!! I was worried that because it has only 160 chapters compared to other stories, I thought it wasgonna another abandoned novel without an ending!! For that I thank you author I like that it's a good story and it doesn't drag on. Nice short and sweet!! it does have a few loose ends but doesn't matter the main characters story is more important. Good job!!!

"they didn't have a way to mastubate.." a 2 yr old can say that!? do you know what mastubate mean? I know this is being translated but do make sure you understand all the meanings of some words so it doesn't come off as really inappropriate!!! and make the story lose its validation

It's such a shame how these authors just abruptly end the stories leaving again unhappy people who have spend so much money buying chapters!! luckily for me I skipped to the end to see and found out before I spend too much!! I got burned before just like this so I've learnt to check the ending first before wasting money!!! it's too bad because it is such a good, well written story and excellent translation!!!

just wondering why the chapter says 10 million and she sold it for 10 million but it's 2 million. it's not about money it's about the story, was it a typo? I know it's a translation novel, but doesn't anyone proofread before releasing it???and yes English is probably your second or third language but it's also mine and that was an easy typo to fix