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where did you get this novel from?

It's stupid, unless it's someone like Toji with no cursed energy, there's no way the six eyes wouldn't have found him and without Toji's speed he could have dodged it unless the next chapter explains that he did it purpose

Honestly, when he tells him that he is destined for greatness, it must have been a moment of reflection to accept his new life once and for all and what it entails, instead of doing it without some mental development from the mc.

It would have been great if he searched and grabbed a feebas so that later he had milotic

Is there any purpose to make him a crybaby or is it just to annoy?

god where did the change go step by step? that was terrible, why not just speak with few words like gaara does and start stopping looking like he will kill them at any moment, also if he has so much problem with the mixture of memories he should deal with that before going to train

is that in the presentations I understand that you wanted to give each character their unique personality and all that but it seems to me that they are very eccentric and exaggerated it would not bother me if it were 1 or 2 from time to time but they are very frequent I do not know if I explain myself well, It's just my opinion in general the story is very good

man the story is good but it makes me a little uncomfortable and it annoys me a little that abuse of personalities so "exaggerated" so often

although i agree with hiruko's strength i still think that in the last battles you have been nerfing kakashi

Hey, I suddenly thought of this, but there shouldn't be information about Fairy Tail's 3 magics in the master's documents, so there should be information about the Fairy Sphere, right?

the chapter was fine but the "the voice shaking the heavens, nearly every fight stopping, looking in the screams direccion " is too dramatic for a battlefield where hundreds if not thousands die

this fight so early with someone so strong obviously went wrong it would have been better with a rear admiral or vice admiral if you want them to put a reward on him and resist genjutsu it doesn't look good either the only way I see in that world to do it is with del haki conqueror

Will the mc develop something like observation haki or "see" with the vibrations of the earth in the toph style of avatar or something like that?

Why did you change it? I thought it was great that it was alise? she also has much more to develop being an adventurer doing things in the dungeon than with rose who works in the guild there is not much history to do with her...

mmm it's not for nothing but if laboon swallowed the fruit he must have acquired the powers and not stay there, in a buggy flashback he swallows all the fruit without biting it and got the powers basically it's the same...

Hey, you should leave those moments where someone asks something and then they answer like this: - Yes - we go - of course - etc feels like it's just to fill lines in the chapter

I hope so because having gained 50 points in your stats in 2 months it will be difficult to level up in 1 year, also most level up with stats from 600 to 800 but at least as a protagonist you should bring all your stats to 999 before level up

He has lived in Dedalo for 11 years, which is the worst place to live in Orario. Literally in the first few chapters, he said that every day they saw people die.

too dramatic is it supposed to be like a "wake up to reality" or something? because there is no point in the dungeon he could die at any moment and he grew up in dedalo that is supposed to be full of death and things like that always

you should try to limit the ramblings of the character it would not matter if it was every 3 or 4 chapters but you have 3 chapters in a row in which he totally deviates for a while and becomes a bit annoying