AlmondJoy

1yr

Commented

I am neither their king nor queen, (No one of importance really), but it is good to know I have my knight to protect me.

ch 0 6 Living in the Palace of Antares

Trapped in Hisstory [BL]

LGBT+ · MissReeed

AlmondJoy

1yr

Commented

Heh- I've never heard anything so true. Hehehe

The demon race was well-known for its unusually cruel nature and foul deeds. They despised all other races, seeing them as lesser beings there to do their bidding. But because of their strength, no one dared to oppose their rule.

The Immortal's Wine Store

Eastern · Malignant

AlmondJoy

2yr

Posted

Overall it is really good, but a tip from me to you, the best way to get a reader into something like romance...What I do is I turn the tables and lets say, dream fell in love with someone else and George goes into a big depression-like state? Idk, but I think that this story needs more of...God this is going to make me sound like a jerk-wad, but we need more of Clay/Dreams mom. We need more description on her. and we need more plot in general. Stay safe, Be gay do crime.