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RazorReptile
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Wasn’t it gab that lied
When he whipped his head around to look away from his burnt home, he pointed at Luz and shouted angrily: "You… You lied to me."
Spatial Magus
Fantasy · Unknownking
Foreshadowing
Gritting his teeth, he rasped in a rough voice, not minding the tears that silently slid down his ashy cheeks: "You… You better wait. You took everything from me… One day… One day… I swear I'll come back and take my revenge for all the misery you caused today."
Spatial Magus
Fantasy · Unknownking
Cry baby 😭 lol
He remained still, not daring to say another word as his eyes were glued to the horrors around them. His own face was stained black with dark ash, veins left behind by wet tears littered his cheeks. There was only a hint of his skin peeking through the gushing rivers streaming from his eyes.
Spatial Magus
Fantasy · Unknownking
That’s rough buddy
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Spatial Magus
Fantasy · Unknownking
26 chaps in and he is alread a king lol Besides that uh there’s like a bunch of words missing lol good chapter
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Nice nice, for a bit I was confused on who was talking it was pretty confusing..
ch 10 Tournament Battle
Immortal Eater
Fantasy · TriadBrew
Lol bro if it’s counting every form of energy, what about his food?
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If you’re looking at reviews deciding whether you should read this novel, well let me tell you, Read it! Atleast the first chapter, because I know you’ll read the rest as well. UnknownKing has great descriptive writing for scenes, like when people are crying or when hes writing about huge scenes like a village. While the writing is descriptive it’s not too much, he doesn’t dwell on subjects that are not important. This novel is worth the read and is a good way to waste time, it has unique characters and is developing an interesting story.
Spatial Magus
Fantasy · Unknownking