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So sorry , but I take my POW stones for a better novel...

After reading quite a lot of chapters, I have to say, it really starts to show that you a first time writer. As good the start was, as bad i was disappointed later. The reason? Are you trying to make a second Naruto or somethin? Because this useless stretching really annoys me, it's similar those 1000+ chapter Chinese novels (Like Mighty Levelling System), where there is no end in sight. And the lot of missed opportunities. You started the MC as an abused , typical loner type who can rely no one at the start, it was pretty interesting, and YOU RUINED IT with this annoying friendship trope, where the MC can struggle as much as he wants, he still cannot get rid theese drags on him. I wanted to give you e WORSE score, but because the first chapters were perfect, that would be unfair..

Well as a veteran reader , I have to say, among the tide of copycat novels , Sins tries to be an original story. At the start there was some difficulties reading it(po: for me it was a little boring, but after 15 chapters the story picks it's pace up), but the later chapters it gets waay better. For horndogs, there is plenty of ero scenes, but actually I stay because of the story. Keep up man!

A really solid quality story with constant new chapters coming out. I personally prefer curbstomping and OP things, and this one does it with moderation. But it's not a bad thing. Keep up man, don't let us down!