Webnovel Author: Entiverse - Novel Collection

1yr

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It felt off in beginning but picked up pace in the third chapter. The humor is good, could leave off words like manga and romcom. Interesting read, would love to see where the story lands, and best wishes to the author.[img=recommend]

Returned by a Thousand Times

Urban · Sageash

Entiverse

1yr

Commented

dame what an ending, alright, i guess a gotta wait

ch 0 3 [HP down to 0]

Returned by a Thousand Times

Urban · Sageash

Entiverse

1yr

Commented

Wa-wait what. hold on what

"Why can't!?" this was the loudest Koi spoke, but Airi's attention was focused on the IV connected to his hand as she shouted,

Returned by a Thousand Times

Urban · Sageash

Entiverse

1yr

Commented

The Father sounds more reasonable

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Returned by a Thousand Times

Urban · Sageash

Entiverse

1yr

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BIGG OUUUFFFFFFFF

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Returned by a Thousand Times

Urban · Sageash

Entiverse

1yr

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"was an obsidian and golden" what???

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Antares: Tales of the Stars

Fantasy · Kydul1137

Entiverse

1yr

Commented

rather than going anti with it, you should make it so they don't give anything away, rather they absorbed solar waves or they are just untrackable and you won't know they are there until it's too late.

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Antares: Tales of the Stars

Fantasy · Kydul1137

Entiverse

1yr

Commented

I pity your MCs, its always one thing after another. Send them on vacation or something.

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Antares: Tales of the Stars

Fantasy · Kydul1137

Entiverse

1yr

Commented

BRUH, not cool bruh. not a good prank, burh

Just then, a blip came from the radar. "What..?" Isaac mumbled as he looked at the radar intently. There was nothing showing up. But a moment later, a large shape, larger than the sub, blipped across screen, and it was right by the weight.

The Eptiguire

Horror · Kydul1137

Entiverse

1yr

Commented

I can for sure say, it is a response against the attacker, since if it was not the creature would have lept up from the ground attack him, rather then him picking it up.

"Date…" he spoke, but, he could hardly remember what day it even was. "October… eighth. Came into contact with a strange organism. The creatures themselves were similar to that of the roots of a plant, when I tried to pull one out of the dirt, it didn't seem to have a beginning or end to it's body anywhere near. This leads me to assume it is some kind of plant like organism, except that it's body is flesh like and has a pinkish red tint. As a defense mechanism, it gives off some kind of red liquid and retractable spikes burst from it's body. The organism spins in an attempt to serrate it's attacker, or victim. I am not sure if this organism hunts others or if it feeds on the nutrients in the soil."

The Eptiguire

Horror · Kydul1137

Entiverse

1yr

Commented

ohh, he forget because of his impending death. WHAT A SILLY GUY

Isaac let out a sigh. Then he remembered, in his distracted, horrified state, he'd forgotten to take note of the strange organisms he'd seen.

The Eptiguire

Horror · Kydul1137

Entiverse

1yr

Commented

dude speak up, that is important information

'It must be related to the scratch mark... it's poisonous!' Zheren thought inwardly. "Matt, help him and drag him to a safe corner," he said to Matt who nodded and began to drag Harry who could no longer stand on his feet. "Everyone must be careful to not get scratched by any of them, they have poisons attached to their claws!"

My Overlord Demon System

Fantasy · Ruby_banks02

Entiverse

1yr

Commented

yes, I am a monster who is going to kill you all, but first. *Puts on glasses and pulls out a whiteboard". now allow me to explain, if you look here....

"Very simple! I fed my babies with the blood I drank from those humans and the blood merged with theirs. Although they don't look very much like those humans, I am still very much pleased with the results," the monster said boldly. "Enough of the talks, it's time I make you kids mine! You two deal with the other four, leave this one to me!"

My Overlord Demon System

Fantasy · Ruby_banks02

Entiverse

1yr

Commented

so this world has undying clowns?????

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My Overlord Demon System

Fantasy · Ruby_banks02

Entiverse

1yr

Commented

potential slaves I say.

"We are going in there, the girl should be inside," Max said to the boys behind him while pointing towards the door. "Now, I don't know if we can come out alive but whatever you do, remember you have a reason to live...." he paused in his speech as he stared at each of the four boys. Does he need to say more? No! It's not like he cared about any of them except Zheren but he felt like he needed to protect them all. Why? The reason he knew not. He sighed inwardly and gestured for them to move towards the door. He was the leader and so his spot was at the front with Zheren behind him followed by Nat, Matt and then Harry who decided to be the last person. Like this, they sauntered to the large door while their eyes kept darting around for fear of any unaware attacks.