Moranna_Rose

1yr

Commented

I hope she doesn't kill him, since Draco will be angry with her xD

ch 145 The Red Door

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Moranna_Rose

1yr

Commented

Are you adding more chapters to forward-readimg again? ;_; Got updates, but no chapters :[

ch 144 The Royal's Room

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Moranna_Rose

1yr

Replied to CHiCKeN_1726

Good point. The mind link seems to work great for the rogues ^^

The Werewolves' mind link was one of the skills used to communicate with their pack mates and their family, but for centuries, the mind link inside the Werewolf realm has begun to get weaker.

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Moranna_Rose

1yr

Commented

It's funny how all the men gets sparks for Rosina, but she gets none for them xD

ch 142 The Multiple Sparks

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Moranna_Rose

1yr

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I was just thinking about something. Maybe it's just me not knowing a whole lot about werewolves, but it seems to change from story to story anyhow. But how far is the range for mind linking? Cause if you can mind link your partner or pack, a kidnapped person would do that, yeah? Also, since you said there's a neck mark, that also allows for mind link between mates, and considering Draco and Rosina just got married, wouldn't the people around them assume that she would have the mark and therefore be asking Draco "have you tried your mind link?"? Another thing; I believe you first wrote that it took over a week travelling from the capital to the 13th pack, but just in a recent chapter you said that it had only taken some days. Did you change it or is it a mistake?

ch 132 The Threat of Leaving

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Moranna_Rose

1yr

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had* been stepped on

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Moranna_Rose

1yr

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On* her bed

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Moranna_Rose

1yr

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It should be "I was so worried"

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Moranna_Rose

1yr

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Hands* in plural

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Moranna_Rose

1yr

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grasping*

"Ah!!!" Violetta screamed with her legs shaking, her back arched while gasping at the mattress for support. The climax lasted for a few seconds before it died down, leaving Violetta in a mess.