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lmao🤣🤣🤣🤣

Well Aja said everything i had to say but she skipped one thing u did a grammatical mistake which is you used "than" in place of "then" you u can look up the difference in google keep it in mind next time😂😂😂.Anyways looking forward for battles in second year.

What romance u expect between 10 yr old students?😂😂😂😂

In my opinion everything is going well till now its funny yet not getting out of storyline much.Looking forward to next chap.

I liked how u made it a cliffhanger ending keeping reader in suspence nd looking forward for next chap. As u said u'll try to make it realistic i have a ques "will there be bullying in university?"😂😂

I don't have much to say here as it's just for building storyline.Just,looking forward to next chapter.

Going pretty good till now.Looking forward to this story.

Nice plot with a really good imagination making it more realistic.You added a whole new town as well as an island to kanto and alot of other stuff quite nice imagination. In short,well written.Waiting for more new stuff in nect chapter.