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Scarlet wanted to use the knife to cut the last of her meat. It wasn't her fault that Ian took it as something else.
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
I wonder what race they are & what race she knows Her to be?
Her lips arrowed into a grin. "You sure are something else, Caesar Romanovich Kuznetsov." The way his name rolled out of her tongue dangerously was eerie.
Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha
Fantasy · PeachBunBun
Aren’t the both of them married though? 🧐
"I'm going to be marrying her, so why can't you just behave like some quiet animal and stay locked in that damn room? You are such a troublemaker, it's nerve-racking!"
Sweet Revenge With My Mafia Alpha
Fantasy · PeachBunBun
They said it was Lydia…. 🧐
"Xaden it's me." She repeated. "Lily."
The Alpha’s Unwanted Bride
History · Stephanie_king1
Wasn’t Lisa the one who got her eyes burned?!?!?
"Do not hello us you slave." Lisa said her hands on her waist. "So it seems you have been thrown back down here."
The Alpha’s Unwanted Bride
History · Stephanie_king1
So he got Cherry pregnant before marrying her? 🧐
Cherry had been betrothed to him once she ascended the throne but after the incident with her hair, and the crown rejecting her, she had been forced to let it and him go.
The Alpha’s Unwanted Bride
History · Stephanie_king1
Jasmine? Belle*
Jasmine had never seen aunt Scarlet but there portraits of her in the castle and the resemblance was unbelievable.
The Alpha’s Unwanted Bride
History · Stephanie_king1
A baby mad elf love even though he can’t love. Curse broken!
He had never been so gentle with her in their proceeds to mate, this was the first time.
The Alpha’s Unwanted Bride
History · Stephanie_king1
Didn’t the guy who gave Aurora what she wanted say Alexander was in the dungeon after what he did? The timeline is with a little messed up oooorrrr…. 🧐
"Enough is enough." Alexander said stepping up. "Xaden isn't coming. I will be the one to take his place."
The Alpha’s Unwanted Bride
History · Stephanie_king1
Majesty?
I bit my bottom lip. "Nothing you majesty."
The Alpha’s Unwanted Bride
History · Stephanie_king1
I thought Dean’s brother was named Liam….
"He is getting the other Alphas to be on you." He said. "They know what you're stronger than them, but Alex has promised them things or they side with him against you. This is the one opportunity Alex has to kill you and he is going to utilize it."
The Alpha’s Unwanted Bride
History · Stephanie_king1
Since when did she find out her name?
So her sister was dead but somehow she had giving birth to Jasmine who had in turn been brought to the pack as a slave.
The Alpha’s Unwanted Bride
History · Stephanie_king1
That’s what her husband called out. 🧐
Her younger sister Rose was placed on the throne and her hair had remained the same.
The Alpha’s Unwanted Bride
History · Stephanie_king1
Don’t they say there is a fine line between love and hate ? 🧐
The irritating cawing would replenish her energy level. Her tears would dry up and as she chased around the bird, she forgot everything else.
The Archduke's Songbird
Fantasy · Golda
Great information here. Honestly the read is good. There is quite a bit of information dump the first chapter (not this where I’m commenting but, the next chapter) which is common with writing because you’re wanting to set up the reader for your story/adventure you have mapped out in your head for them. I highly recommend we talk offline if you want on discord or where ever so you don’t feel like anything is being picked on. Like I said great read fun back story but, a few things could be adjusted so it seems more of a natural flow for the readers in the beginning & setting up everything. If not for this novel then maybe tips & tricks for your next one.
ch 0 -1 Characters Info
Hel and the Emerald Sky City
Fantasy · NastyRaven888
Awwww just like when River &, Annalise’s father, Phillip met or Phillip & Rafael!
They were both smiling so that was a good sign they could get along well but Scarlet didn't care for their game and walked away to find herself food. "Men."
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
Maybe she wanted to kill her but the father spared her… 🤔
"It's been so long that I do not remember. You would need to check the records of the servants who worked here. You must know that the cottage is set to be ruined. Your mother wants to plant a large tree there and to expand the garden," Tom revealed. "Perhaps some of your answers are there. Excuse me."
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167
Oh her great grandma & great grandpa also had a thing for the bathroom mirrors… 🥰🥰🤪
Scarlet was close to looking away. She had never done something like this where she saw herself in the act. It was a bit embarrassing but something to enjoy at the same time. She couldn't believe how she looked now, unable to hide her excitement as Ian entered her.
The Resilient Lady Collins
History · Violet_167