The concept is intriguing but that is where it ends. After that, wether it is story progression, being coherent or the Main character, everything is disappointing. Considering the militarised nature of the world, the lack of respect MC shows towards its military is very surprising. The only apt character trait that author has been able to bring forth is how a typical wealthy son would act. He has his narrow point of view which is based on the elite pov as is usually is.
Fantasy · HideousGrain
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Webnovel
The concept is intriguing but that is where it ends. After that, wether it is story progression, being coherent or the Main character, everything is disappointing. Considering the militarised nature of the world, the lack of respect MC shows towards its military is very surprising. The only apt character trait that author has been able to bring forth is how a typical wealthy son would act. He has his narrow point of view which is based on the elite pov as is usually is.
Primordial Dimensions
Fantasy · HideousGrain