Loving the storyline but I get the feeling the book has either been incorrectly translated or English is not your native language as there are parts where the words written are definitely not what you intended to write there. Perhaps use spell check more for grammar and context corrections otherwise you have a wonderful story and with practice will be a great writer.
ch 12 Chapter-12 Accidental Kiss!
Fantasy · Angelina Bhardawaj
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Loving the storyline but I get the feeling the book has either been incorrectly translated or English is not your native language as there are parts where the words written are definitely not what you intended to write there. Perhaps use spell check more for grammar and context corrections otherwise you have a wonderful story and with practice will be a great writer.
ch 12 Chapter-12 Accidental Kiss!
My Personal Lycan King
Fantasy · Angelina Bhardawaj