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What's up, everyone? I'm back. I decided to continue here. If there are things you would like to see, please comment. 

Odin the Boundless

Odin the Boundless

Anime & Comics · Vincent_0580

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Not much of a surprise if you tell us about it lol

AN - Next chap Flying Lesson! Without Draco around how would the class change? Plus a surprise POV change along with the next target reveal in the next chapter.

Harry Potter: Ero World

Harry Potter: Ero World

Book&Literature · light_novel_addict

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This is going to come back to bite them huh

"Ah, Ms. Carter," Kathleen Taylor began, "I apologize for arriving unannounced." Ms. Carter assured her it was no problem. The CEO continued, "This is my nephew Tyson Smith, and his fiance, Illyana."

Rogue Replacement: A Marvel Story

Rogue Replacement: A Marvel Story

Anime & Comics · Steatoda

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I liked it idk why all the hate

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Ans: Nope, call my naming sense worse, but I honestly thought it's a good name. :(

Marvel: I Need A New Body

Marvel: I Need A New Body

Anime & Comics · Marveller

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Liking the pace and depth of process. Though, the dialogue can be a bit long winded at times.

The story should pick up the pace from here on forth. But I honestly don't think that's it's slow paced, and the reason anyone feels that way is because each chapter is only a 1000 words and not a lot of development can happen with that little of a word count

God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem

God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem

Urban · AGodAmongMen

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Bro this chick is crazy

"And the boldness and energy your eyes give off, as if they wouldn't ripple even if the whole world started falling apart." She gasped.

God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem

God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem

Urban · AGodAmongMen

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Mc: “can MY dad fight?”

With a figure like that, there's no way in hell I'm ever going to actually consider her as my mother. Hell, I'd probably even fight my dad in this world to make her mine.

God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem

God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem

Urban · AGodAmongMen

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He also kept glancing at the children behind him who were reading books on their small tables, and then he looked at the screen while continuously shaking his hands.

God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem

God of Milfs: The Gods Request Me To Make a Milf Harem

Urban · AGodAmongMen

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