Us readers be like this 😂
There was something in the way Dante uttered those words that heightened Anastasia's arousal, turning her even wetter, and she furiously blushed under his burning gaze. As he sat between her legs, her curious eyes travelled down his toned body before settling on his hardened manhood, and she gulped at the sight.
Fantasy · ash_knight17
*meredith the story is well written with a nice pace, but the spelling and typos are too distracting. I would focus on making sure the editing is correct, as nothing stops and disrupts a good flow more than grammatical mistakes and wrong use of pronouns
Her mother looked so worried as if they were preparing for a funeral rather than marriage. The palace looked dull too. The lady made the excuse that she had a meeting to attend but I am sure that she did not want to marry anymore." The words brought a smirk on the face of Madeline who fanned herself hiding her face.
Fantasy · I_am_Creator
"on fire"? :)
Chi Lian shot up like her bums were on fair, "Why mother? That really hurts." She wailed.
Urban · 1cutecat
I think it's supposed to be "doting" - exceedingly fond/adoring of someone, like a parent showering their child with unrestrained love and affection :)
"I guess this means I am now a grandmother." Mama Chi smiled and clapped. It had been a long time since she had held a child. She had always been looking forward to having grandchildren but none of her sons were married. She looked at Mei-Mei lovingly. Her eyes portrayed a dotting intention. "Let me help you prepare Mei-Mei's room."
Urban · 1cutecat
I think the word is supposed to be "dilapidated" - a building/structure in a state of disrepair or crumbling, due to old age or negligence :)
After crying her heart out, Chi-Chi left her mother's embrace and looked at their house. It was so depilated and old that even mice would probably not want to occupy it. It was so tiny and her three brothers were sharing one room. She was the only one who had a room all to herself.
Urban · 1cutecat
Shut up prince Raylen!!😱
"It looks like I have arrived at an inopportune time," Prince Raylen replied. He then continued, "Also, I was with the Elder ministers when the request from the royal palace arrived and was processed and sealed, regarding you having your own concubine. Congratulations to both of you." The corner of the prince's eyes crinkled as he smiled.
Fantasy · ash_knight17
I might be too rigid and old-fashioned, but words such as 'dude' is not appropriate for serious historical stories. It simply ruins the mood, atmosphere and flow in the reading, making it seem a bit infantile. This is just my opinion, and in no way meant to hurt the feelings of the Author! Otherwise intriguing story! I look forward to delve into this :)
Man and wife! Of course not. Vampire and slave sounded more like it, if they were generous enough they could call her wife but the dude that stood before her was no man.
Fantasy · GinaStanley
Elliot Squad Assemble! The most lowkey, but still sweetest and kindest character of the Knights 🥰
"Is something the matter, Sir Elliot?"
Fantasy · Suji Kim
See this! I just gifted the story: Inspiration capsule
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
Fantasy · Suji Kim
I love how the usually sweet tempered Elliot is one of strongest voters for a war, because of his loyalty to Maxi and Riftan ❤
Sir Ursuline was not the only one. The incident must have affected Elliot as well, as he had been one of the most vehement about going to war with the duke. Though none of the knights disclosed the details of what had transpired, Hebaron was certain that Lady Calypse had suffered a great atrocity.
Fantasy · Suji Kim
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
ch 0 1 Chapter 1
Fantasy · Suji Kim
The famous wall-slam and Lucius instinctively puckers his lips ready for a kiss. He's such a girl 🤣😆😍
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Hebaron, the knights and the readers xD
A collective sharp gasp sounded through the room. Hebaron, who had been watching the argument wearing a smirk, covered his forehead with his hand.
Fantasy · Suji Kim
Ah okay, thank you for the clarification:)
She was not treated nicely at all in her family. Her father and brother even used to hit her. I could not believe how someone could hit someone like her. The king brought her from her family somehow, but I did not know how since she did not tell me about it.
Fantasy · Proteety_Promi
I'm sorry to point out, but that's either a gap in Ezekiels memory or a gap in the story. When Blue visits Luc the first time without Demetrius, she confides in Luc while Ezekiel is present and Ezekiel is horrified by the fact that Demetrius bought, aka a transaction, Blue instead of wooing her and then bringing her to the kingdom
She was not treated nicely at all in her family. Her father and brother even used to hit her. I could not believe how someone could hit someone like her. The king brought her from her family somehow, but I did not know how since she did not tell me about it.
Fantasy · Proteety_Promi
See this! I just gifted the story: Massage chair
ch 887 Adorable
Fantasy · KazzenlX
I've become the Villainous emperor of a novel
"I should have ripped that man to pieces," he snarled, pressing his face to her stomach.
Fantasy · Suji Kim
I hope it's his "other hand" squeezing her waist, and not his mother 😂
Killorn laid a blazing gaze against her body, one that licked through every naked skin he could see. He visibly searched for injuries, but was relieved to see none. With a calloused hand, he tenderly cupped her face. Immediately, she melted into his touch, just as his mother squeezed the curve of her waist.
Alpha's Cruel Addiction
Fantasy · Xincerely