forces

the ending doesn't sound that bad to me all you need to do is make the ending boss weaker so that you can save points and not completely getting rid of the boss.

I forgot to add 6 they plately forgot the area near the academy I thought they going to go back to the area but clearly forgot

there is some things I don't like about this book 1 what about the promise that they're made with the level two artifact he promised to level up two level one 2 what about the girl somehow disappeared 3 and I want to see how strong the soldier is when it level up to level 1 4 what about the Lotus academys in the other Kingdom 5 they don't talk about the of the kingdom much and what they thought about the lotus Kingdom when they all sudden became this powerful or ascend 5 and what about the second body

I meant to say 12 chapters

only listen to 15 chapters might be better later on but one thing I don't like because I do listen to audio me I don't know if they're different to people who don't listen to Audio because I don't like how when the character speech like it being Rush or something but I will giving it a chance

I want more chapters coming out and then I will give a five star

good book but I feel like some areas skip over when new players join or updated because I really want to see that part

he should try to pick up talents can truly help the world like five or more times that one Talent children of wisdom he was jealous of but make it better

I only up to the second ch and I hope they have more than one pair of wings and have multiple angel wings because more powerful the angel more wings they are

I will be reading it I really hope it different from the other ones I read like he forgetting his Talent and don't leave a world for like 500 chapters in the book in the book just ends shortly after because the idea to experience different worlds