Cosray8d - Profile

This fic is basically a sociopathic Gary Stu hunting for waifus and make them as strong as possible while being a fighting maniac. It's very well written and for a harem fic with so many waifus it's girls are also mostly well established and characterized. The only problem I have is the end of Orochimaru and what happened with Guren and this Yuki girl from Oto because they apparently were forgotten.

This is a fairly well written fic - however with a spineless Mc without any goals beyond becoming the pinnacle of this world. He's like a polite, way less perverted issei without ambition and with low self esteem. The only reason he actually gets stronger is because it's expected of him. His real goal is to be a side character for the main cast and if he's lucky and pitiful enough to sleep with some of the female cast. He has an extremely Op fruit but instead of utilizing it for magic to its fullest potential he instead prefers to be a meat head close ranged fighter simply because it feels cooler. The only one who regularly sleeps with him took pity on him and due to a curse and is really easy to satisfy. Half of the crew abandoned him because he is too much of a coward to deviate from canon and stagnate. And now he's with the canon crew to "become stronger" only to still be held by the hand of the few fate characters who took pity on him making his growth even slower. He basically tells everyone who he wants to f*ck 9/10 of his secrets,background and powers immediately. However there are (very few) signs that he will eventually get better.

This fic desperately needs a rewrite. The concept of a gamer in the To-Love-Ru world is interesting but cultivation is hard to understand in the best case and complete bullsh*t in the worst case. Mc doesn't even show how he trains and cultivates, making the whole system meaningless. Borrowing a system and explicitly stating its from someone else is just lazy. Then there's the gacha - very few manage to use it in a good way but here it was just used to introduce a character of Fate that gets more screen time than any To-Love-Ru characters in this story and it has 0 consequences beyond adding another waifu to a harem world that is already bursting with the number of love interests. The writing quality is mediocre but the constant use of "kinda" is infuriating. The Mc is basically a trap (because his adoptive mom said long hair looks good on him) - if you're into that good for you. But all the characters constantly saying he looks like a girl/trap gets annoying really quick. For me it was the least glaring problem in this fic. I stopped around chapter 25 because some reviews indicated that it gets better but I could endure only that much.