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Well, lets start with things that got to me on minus before I say Just how much real fun this story gave me! For starters, the fact that "text" isnt really used in dialogues as what characters are saying was a bit hard to get used to at first, however later this problem is solved with seperating sentences from narration with -text- and on a meantime thoughts are shown as "text". Other minus Worth mentioning is that the text do hold a few grammar errors that are very eye-catching, however I am a person that makes a lot of such mistakes myself and taken to accord that story itself is very good for me I cant really say those errors hurt. Especially, as they are easy to be figured out in our minds as for what the autor had in mind. Last Minus that around 18 days ago turned into a plus was that I honestly thought that this story was abandoned which litteraly broke my heart in my chest as I believed that I wont get to learn the rest of the story that involved a very nice relation of Kill in need for a good real parent and a good-hearted Dadzawa. I also really liked the interactions of Killua with other classmates that kinda showed that he isnt as cold as he was in hxh due to Gon changing him a lot and Alluka giving him a goal in this new world that he can strive for. Speaking of which it is one of the many pluses. Tho I cant Say about one or two characters acting as they really should sometimes its really hard for a fanfic to do Such thing and as for me, Emerald still did an incredible job at showing us the character interactions and overall how they acted. For Example Killua that I mentioned before that we can see has changed Thanks to his Expierience through the whole HunterxHunter story. Story also involves quite a nice addition like the story-line of underground. Hero's raid, Aizawa Undercover missions and Killua work as underground fighter. All of this is a really nice addition, even if some part are nibbling a bit on MHA Cannon. Lets be real, its a fanfic. Dont cry about some new parts added on the story or altered as thats what makes Such things interesting, right? To end my already long reviev.. I love the story and characters and the idea author had and shared with us! To the point that I admit to say that I cant wait to see more chapters! Hopefully I see more Adventures with Killua and Class 1-A! Also also, I know that I gave 3 on updating stability but life can be tough for us all and I know that there often will be important reasons for delays in a story. Well, I gotta stick to it and see more of it! 😁