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[…] but this move

"The feint is a very tricky move if used in the correct situation, and this move will be useless until you master it. The parry can be used to reduce the force of the opponent's move, and for the block, it is to completely block the opponent's move."

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DaoistUkcxXN
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wasn't that hard. got the gist of it after […]

For this move, he took a long time learning, as he had to learn how to transfer the weight from one part to another body part. But it isn't that hard, and he got started easily after a few tries.

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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[…] learning it

For this move, he took a long time learning, as he had to learn how to transfer the weight from one part to another body part. But it isn't that hard, and he got started easily after a few tries.

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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Change and to as

"Yeah, it is an emperor-tier scripture, but I only got the first part, and for the remaining part, I don't know." Alex said with some regrets.

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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Change basis to basics

[Nameless Scripture] is the title of the book. After reading the entire book, Kai was amazed by its profoundness. The book only talks about the basis of sword fighting and the basis of footwork, but its applications are on a whole another dimension.

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Path of Absolute Transcendence

Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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And a sword is the passion of every man. (maybe)

"I chose the sword, dad" Kai replied, because he always had a keen interest in swords, and a sword is the romance of every man. 

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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The subordinate clause sounds weird.

"I chose the sword, dad" Kai replied, because he always had a keen interest in swords, and a sword is the romance of every man. 

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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[…] in comparison to the last three months.

What Alex said was correct; Kai could already feel that his body stopped developing like it grown for the past 3 months.

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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Kai, we will stop these exercises as you have reached the physical limits of a mortal and they won't increase your strength much anymore.

"Kai, now let's stop doing the exercise. Your body has already developed to the limits of the mortal, and if you further want to increase, it will take a lot of time." 

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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these exercises

Kai continued to do this exercise for three months under his father's guidance.

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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[…] and allowing him to keep the training going […]

So, Riya always gave him meat once a week. The meat prevents Kai from damaging his body and keeps the training going without any danger.

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Eastern · innocent_thought

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[…] which correspond […]

The beasts are divided into Tiers one through six and correspond to the major realms. The meat of Tier 3 beasts is very helpful for him if eaten in small amounts.

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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[…] performing high-intensity exercises […]

Riya also visited them daily and made food with beast meat for Kai. Because he is doing high-intensity exercise, she prepared the food with Tier 3 beasts.

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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First sentence becomes kind lf redundand if implemt the changes of the paragraph above.

Then Kai did the push-ups until he reached the limit. He did a total of 230 pushups because most of the weight didn't affect this exercise.

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
DaoistUkcxXN
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Like: what exercises (asking if weapon training is included).

"Dad, do I need to start my training with an extra load on me?" Kai asked doubtfully.

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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If you change the above this needs tweaking too.

"Dad, do I need to start my training with an extra load on me?" Kai asked doubtfully.

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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Remove and after that. Just say something like this: thus you will need to complete these basic exercises.

"Kai, now you need to adapt your body to these weights, and after that, we will begin our training now." Alex revealed the purpose of bracelets and ankets.

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Eastern · innocent_thought

DaoistUkcxXN
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* added weight

"Kai, now you need to adapt your body to these weights, and after that, we will begin our training now." Alex revealed the purpose of bracelets and ankets.

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