Alright, im not usually the kind of person to read or enjoy romance novels, but this is really good. My only real complaint is that the chapters are a bit short, but overall, good book.
This book is overall pretty good so far. The best part is the writing quality, but the story seems interesting too. Similarly to others, my main complaint is that it does seem to advance too fast. Overall seems quite good, though hard to judge with such few chapters
yeah ill probably do some rewrites to fix some stuff eventually but rn im just writing mostly for fun
Basically theres almost never earthquakes where they live so they were more confused and no one really knew what to do in an earth quake. It was also not exactly a massive earthquake.
As the teacher spoke, a sudden booming quake began. The room shook rapidly. Dead silence filled the room as the shaking ceased, earthquakes almost never happened where they lived, so it was very odd to everyone there. This silence was short-lived, however, as the window was suddenly shattered with a loud crash and glass shards flew across the room.
Game End System
Urban · SeventhValentine
Author here, shamelessly self-reviewing lol. I hope all of you enjoy the novel, ill be uploading new chapters daily and I've got a lot of ideas ahead for the story.
Overall a good book, good writing quality and the story is interesting, so are the characters. I'll be continuing to read this, keep up the good work author!
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original Game End System
Across the globe, millions were branded with a strange rune in their dreams, granting them systems. On that same day, the invasion began. Portals tore through space and time, horrid monsters crawling out from it. The world wasn't ready for it, and billions died on that day. Joseph, a mostly normal 16-year-old boy, for an unknown reason, was gifted an advanced version of the same system everyone else got, the Prime System. Now he must survive and stop the demonic forces invading the earth, guided by the system. Inspired by novels like Solo Leveling and Omniscient Reader. Cover art is not mine, if it's yours contact me, and ill change it.7 Chs 8 Collections
a little edit, not daily, mostly daily, but not daily all the time lol
Game End System
Urban · SeventhValentine