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AdamFlores

AdamFlores

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I like reading and writing fiction, obviously

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Replied to tido_racks

Indeed, however.....

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The redhead opened her mouth, wanting to question him about 'How someone who got the power of destruction for just a day could use it better than her'

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Honkai impact: Dimensional Herrscher

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Replied to John9999000000

That's a bit... hard to believe. But I appreciate that you think so

Enough of my problems. I have also realized once again that I'm really untalented in writing fighting scenes. But beyond that, I hope you enjoyed this chapter

Honkai impact: Dimensional Herrscher

Honkai impact: Dimensional Herrscher

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Replied to Lazyboi

Ahem, that was a small error I forgot to alter

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AdamFlores
Replied to Lazyboi

A bit improbable with Ironwood's character, at least he should have few people down there to monitor the situation

The official saluted, his hand trembling slightly. "We've detected an increase in Grimm activity," he reported, his words rushed. "Towns are being destroyed, and our defenses are struggling to hold them back."

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Honkai impact: Dimensional Herrscher

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Replied to Lazyboi

Ah yes, the good old 'The real treasure was the friends we made along the way', but in this context, I suppose it is the 'scenery' or the 'things' that have been experienced I suppose I could follow what you said, however, I feel the need to have a valid excuse in order for Adam to leave Rias and wander around, as I believe doing that without any purpose and intent will be quite meaningless. I have figured out a rough outline of what can be used in the second sequence where Adam fights Salem, however, the first sequence where they meet and communication is a bit more difficult. As what to they communicate about? What will be the topic? Where do they meet? These are a few questions where the difficulty lies in having such a sequence lies Also... I feel like, even if Adam can't mind control Salem, he should at least be able to peak into her surface thoughts. Omega Level Psionics, from a person that is a perfect match to be the avatar of a cosmic force shouldn't be as weak as to not be able to peek into Salem's head. Although not at full power, Adam's current prowess with telepathy should be enough, unless of course, Salem is also quite strong in that field- enough to repel Psionics with Omega level potential About the use of the relic of choice... I suppose you meant to write Adam using it, but not explain it further and delve into what he saw, leaving it a mystery? That's what I gathered from what you suggested, and it does sound like an excellent excuse for Adam to fight Salem in another way... and it also saves me the headache of trying to come up with a suitable vision into a potential future, which is quite troublesome There is time to figure things out, but I wouldn't mind you cooking up some ideas that can be used for the first sequence of Adam's meeting with Salem, or even the second which I already have a rough outline

AdamFlores
AdamFlores
Replied to Genedrag

Those are all valid statements, but then again... Regarding the matter that he has both a code and a geass, that was done because at the time, I didn't have sufficient knowledge about code geass. But if an explanation is needed, then it could be said that he himself doesn't have a Geass, the code he has obtained belonged to CC, so the fact that this code isn't 'his' means that can process both a code and a geass without any conflict As for his power, to be honest, it's not that exaggerated. I said this many times, but Adam is not a MANTIS, his body only has honkai adaptability, and the ability to devour honkai beasts. If he became a MANTIS and got the full power, his body would... well, it would just explode, his form would distort, and he would also hear ravings from his honkai beast part By the way, he is a reincarnated person, and his soul could handle multiple unique skills. And besides that, it isn't necessary to die in order to get unique skills from the Tensura world, from my knowledge, any outsider that crosses over to the cardinal world is eligible to obtain unique skills. Also, there is a reasonable explanation as to why he knows martial arts and could enroll into Chiba academy while being an orphan. He is a reincarnator, and because he had past experiences and knowledge while also knowing the world he was in, he learned martial arts and had certain connections that could give him a chance to enroll there. And that is all without delving into the circumstances of his orphanage situation, as without spoling much, he met a certain canon character of the story Even ignoring all of the above, I have stated that this is a power-fantasy, wish fulfilment story. Although I am trying to keep things logical and realistic, this is in the end a fan fiction, and we delve into fantasy to escape reality, so it is inevitable that some things would not be realistic. Besides, I admit that he is strong, but compared to all of fiction? He is relatively weak. Out of all the overpowered people out there in fiction, he isn't really what you could call 'overpowered'. Even in the honkai world, multiple people could still beat him easily, as most of his unique skills don't even have direct combat application Of course, this is my first work, so mistakes are also bound to be made. I can't really make a perfect fan fiction as that is impossible, but I suppose I had indeed made some mistakes that could have been avoided

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