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Sonya,,,, Raganr... Fun

The stroy progression is good for now but teh author really needs to define teh situation well to maintaion teh balance between eth two chjarecters in teh long run. I hope you are able to perform eth dutuy well.

The plot development iS good one. I hope the author is able top continue this work and provide a unique arc to the story. can't wait to read more./

The story is progressing in a very systematics way. The authors approach of having two main characters is something i have read for the first time, and it feels like the story will have multiple twists in its plots as it progresses

The idea behind this novel is quite good. The mc doesn't get too strong in a short interval of time and the story progression is made such that a reader is able to connect and feel time passing within the novel. I like the plot design and the character description a lot.