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Winter_Webb
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I LOVE the beginning, like- unexplainable love it. How the system is explained, how its thought out and created is fucking bloody awesome. And the the first chapters name- that got me, so unexpected yet correct from the first few sentences. How its written and how the world is created and the story grows- unbelievable 11/10 book should be printed and sold. And im not even done reading yet LOL
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I love how u write!!! I love the story idea and how u create it over the chapters!! Most stories depend on their summary which usually is weird but urs was catchy!!
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"These are my sons, Axel and Grain." I stopped moving, I stopped breathing. The air that once filled my lungs now wrapped around my throat and tightened at every heated second that passed. In front of me, stood a very tall boy with blue eyes and a goody smile. His brownish bangs hung loosely around giving him the more immature look rather than the next to be Alpha look. The other boy who stood a little shorter was less relaxed. The boy was more burly than Axel but less thick in the muscle area of his arms and chest. His bright blue eyes pierced mine as I fought to lunge at him. This boy, the boy who cost me everything, the one who told the Alpha and betrayed me and the future Alpha. In front of me stood Grain Bryce, the traitor.
This Tired Soul
Fantasy · Winter_Webb