Good story
Fantasy · Debasish_padhi
I like how the author is priogressing his story but i would love if you can be more frequent in your updates and correct your chapters more frequently. I also think that the story isi going to soon converge into a single charecter.
Urban · Debasish_padhi
need support in this area
ch 0 5 A FAILURE
Good progression till now but a ot pf grammatical mistakes present.
Good one
Eastern · Debasish_padhi
I love how the author is able to create t6wo different paths for the story to develop and shown two different outlooks. i would love to see how the two characters finally meet and what happens between them.
this is a fresh take on zero to hero protagonist and I think the author will try to advance the entire background world into multi-planets or even multi-universal ones since the god sanctum's name is not yet known..
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Good story
LEGACY OF THE FALLEN FAMILY
Fantasy · Debasish_padhi