Immortal_saint

1yr

Posted

Have a good feeling about this story for now. Give it a read.

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Fantasy · Debasish_padhi

Immortal_saint

2yr

Replied to GATE_ASPIRANT

same here.

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Fantasy · Debasish_padhi

Immortal_saint

2yr

Commented

The beginning commendable but teh author needs to build tehs tyroy well from here. i am awaiting to see what kind of turns you are able to bring into teh story.

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Fantasy · Debasish_padhi

Immortal_saint

2yr

Posted

I conti8nued to read it and its is great

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Fantasy · Debasish_padhi

Immortal_saint

2yr

Posted

Good one. i feel like the author is really appreciating having double characters as protagonist. His other novel AIGIs still portrays the two characters as the protagonist, but this one3 might be different.

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Urban · Debasish_padhi

Immortal_saint

2yr

Replied to GATE_ASPIRANT

hehehe

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Urban · Debasish_padhi

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2yr

Commented

Good beginning but will te4h two children be mentally crippled asfter losing their parents.

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Urban · Debasish_padhi

Immortal_saint

2yr

Posted

Long tao is overpowered. i truly wants to see ghow he is going to inetgrate narutop with his story.

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Eastern · Debasish_padhi

Immortal_saint

2yr

Posted

The story has proper zero to hero like progression and the author is able to properly depict the scene in the context and a reader is able to get a good sense of direction where the story is heading.

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