Hallo i think i mistake has happen here chapter 53 and 54 og the exact same as 51 and 52 if possible it would be nice if you corrected Else the Story is good so far and keep up the Good work
Hey sorry for the late reply i can do that in three days need some money so i can bite chapters put it in my library and should be able to begin to read it in three days
isn Chapter 4 exactly the same a chapter 3 please fix it
is it just me or washing Bolt and Dash the males and vex the Female
Hey Just wanted to mention that in the ladder have it seems to repeat itself
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i think we riding it is the best option of because you can cried remember what you were playing for the Story and since all the new stuff with One piece at coming out Maybe a lot of different things my comment and also glad you back and in good health and hopely for the facilable future[img=recommend][img=recommend]
The second option: to rewrite this novel from the beginning in a different way.
One Piece: The Ship of Lust
Anime & Comics · muhned
quick question to anyone who is more Familia with this Universe because i am getting confused with or day on a planet that's name Earth or order in space because i'm getting confuse it was sometimes it sounds like they are on a planet other time is it sounds like there in space again in my just be me but it's getting confusing
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Option 1: Leave it as is with the Kemel Galaxy being destroyed.
S.P.E.C.T.O.R - [A Sci-fi space adventure with fantasy elements]
Sci-fi · Sweeps83