I’ll give you a piece of advice too. If you can’t handle the heat, go to Wattpad. Wattpad doesn’t have a review feature like Webnovel so I know for a fact that if Wattpad readers don’t like something, they’ll just drop it, no criticisms or anything. Wattpad’s system is entirely around user interaction so if they don’t like it, your fanfic will just drift to the bottom and you can keep writing to yourself like you wanted.
Psh! As if it was that easy to write. It's easy to read since even kids can do it, but write, bruh I won't tell you to write a fanfic or anything, but don't just assume it's that easy.
Anime & Comics · SchadenFriday
The whole “you can’t complain about free things” argument is stupid. The obvious counter-argument is why you’re posting something online if you can’t handle the backlash. I don’t think either side was wrong at first, because there’s nothing unacceptable with posting constructive criticism and there’s nothing unacceptable with arguing about the constructive criticism either since that’s how you learn and make improvements. What IS unacceptable, however, is making an entire chapter to oust the guy in front of all your readers. That does nothing except embarrass the guy and feed your over-inflated ego. This is embarrassingly immature.
Psh! As if it was that easy to write. It's easy to read since even kids can do it, but write, bruh I won't tell you to write a fanfic or anything, but don't just assume it's that easy.
Anime & Comics · SchadenFriday
No I’m saying her AI generated eyes look weird when you zoom in. It looks like her eyes are looking at different things
Pricilla Rosier
Book&Literature · BoOk_LoV3r_429
What happened to her eyes ;-;
Pricilla Rosier
Book&Literature · BoOk_LoV3r_429
Character development? Usually you learn something about the character and the plot progresses a bit. This is 26 chapters, a lot can happen. He’s still the same generic character as he is in chapter one, and we learn nothing about him except his personality is cardboard
There are also a whole lot better.
Makes my head hurt. Seems like this author has a tendency to over explain, which also causes a lot of repetitiveness. In the first chapter alone, there’s a mind reading ROB that keeps repeating the same things over and over. For example, some girl chose to reincarnate as Frieren, and the ROB a paragraph later goes “she’s the first person to choose a different race” like bruh we got that already you don’t have to say that again. Happens again when mc picks his class as well, the ROB goes “the outcast is a weak class but it’s good if they know how to use it” and the mc parrots that a paragraph later. Even if you don’t know how to show not tell, at least stop repeating what you told over and over again. Also please stop using italics. The more you bold or italicize something the less impact it has. There’s no need for the fancy stuff, it only makes it worse if you don’t know how to use it. If normal words are good enough for real authors, it’s probably good enough for you.
Danmachi: The Outcast
Anime & Comics · Guionista