*your* as in belongs to you. you're = you are 🥴
"Well done as always Siya," Nillous said, leaning back in his chair with a smile. "You're strategies never let me down."
Fantasy · Lions_Quill
Don't need closing quotation marks at end of paragraph if the same person is still speaking at the beginning of next paragraph. but always included opening quotes. don't hate me please. I'm just trying to help.
"OK, here's the plan. Nillous, you change into a defensive formation and hold that river bank when it's your turn, don't let them cross, but don't get overaggressive and try to cross yourself…" I picked up my scout and moved him far across the board towards a ruin. A tile with defensive advantages. "Send your scout to follow mine to this ruin, we can form a pseudo-third party between the two of them."
Fantasy · Lions_Quill
Thanks for the chapter‼️
just wish I'd have seen it on your Patreon.
He let out a powerful roar as he cleaved through several skeletons with one swipe of his greatsword, taking out another with a thrust from his torch. "COME AND TASTE MY METAL!"
Fantasy · Lions_Quill
wait ! previous paragraph said the torch was on the ground!
He let out a powerful roar as he cleaved through several skeletons with one swipe of his greatsword, taking out another with a thrust from his torch. "COME AND TASTE MY METAL!"
Fantasy · Lions_Quill
Thanks for the chapter ‼️
ch 42 Secret Tunnle.
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pierce
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Fantasy · Lions_Quill
'If that's how you want to play it.' I quickly pulled out my bow and drew an arrow, running at full speed in an orbit around it, outruning its chains, and sometimes propelling myself off of them to doge. Each arrow I fired pierced its skin, but none of them could reach its heart through its thick hide. Since I had no better target I started filling its head with arrows, drawing out an outline for where its face should have been, but that only made it angry.
Fantasy · Lions_Quill
please don't skip words in a sentence.
Second - Ardel was too shy(How?) to attack when he was being watched... Was it because of his personality or...? Because he was a shy type of assassin who wished to kill when he wasn't being watched? Wait... My thoughts are becoming weird...
Fantasy · Peace_in_Chaos
Thank you‼️
Thanks for the chapter‼️
ch 41 Finding the Trail
Fantasy · Lions_Quill
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Thanks for the chapter‼️
ch 190 Eswosten
Knowledge and Power: Reborn into a society that only values strength.
Fantasy · Lions_Quill