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The character is arrogant as fuck for now, but the author seems to be blending some kind of family angle and some sort of interest in side characters as well. if he could o that well, i think this will be a great story

The story progression is good. Give it a try. I think most of the fantasy lovers will like the way it progresses.

A nice beginning but needs more update. i wills support in case you become more active and regular.

Never expected a twisted story with a powerful and cunning protagonist like this.

I like the way the author has managed to develop the stage for two characters to eventually have a memorable battle. It would affect their future. i would lobe for the author to be ab bit better in his writings nd descriptive nature, but it is on the right tracks.

The story plotline is fine. The character development seems to be going on in a uniform manner. The antagonist is revealed as the god's sanctum.