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Runic_Gold

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Read up to 200 chapters Writing Quality - Well-written novel that does not have many noticeable grammar mistakes. Dialogue between characters are good and have variety to them based on characteristics of the people speaking. Stability of Updates - New chapters look like they are being released in a consistent manner. Story Development - The novel's pacing is on the slower end but still remains enjoyable for the reader to follow the story of the main character as we learn and uncover the mysterious background he comes from. The novel steers away from some common troupes seen in other similar superhero novels and excels in telling a captivating story that has the reader anticipating for what is coming in the future. Character Design - Good character design ranging from the main protagonist to side characters in the academy. Characters are memorable and fleshed out with their own problems to deal with. I am looking forward to how you will develop them more in later chapters. World Background - The novel revolves around a society of people with superhuman abilities with a broad scope of abilities that are possible. Additional expansion of the existing world would be nice and introductions to organizations could be improved on. Overall, a decently well-written novel that I am looking forward to continuing at a later date. I hope that this novel gets more attention that it deserves and maintains the quality of writing it currently has right now.

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I have read my fair share of MTL Chinese cultivation novels and this.. this is not good in terms of writing quality and grammar. Breaking up each sentence into it's own section in my opinion disrupts the "flow" of the chapter with the inability to write complete, whole paragraphs hampering the overall reading quality on the reader. Stability of updates have been somewhat consistent with some missing days that are made up with extra chapters in the next. Story development, in all to honest truth is terrible in which the author has turned a seemingly interesting concept of a story in the beginning to one of absolute boredom and repetition with introduction to new skills that end up being forgotten and a boring character design which the same cliche is used over and over again. The author seems to also like to have the MC consistently nerfed with the introduction of new, stronger characters. Also, if you're going to have a hardworking MC, at least show some significant results as a result of his hardworking nature. Conclusion: Garbage novel overall, plagued with the authors lack of sense of story and character development paired with the terrible grammar and writing quality even after TWO THOUSAND CHAPTERS. With the only redeeming qualities of which being the original concept that has been long forgotten and daily chapters for readers to spend their stones on. For a novel being "highly" ranked up on the rankings, it completely falls short and mocks other authors on this website that have put serious time in their own novels in terms of writing quality, editing, and story development/design. It's frankly unfortunate that some author's will never get the proper recognition and popularity as this novel.

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