Webnovel Author: Mr_Morning_Star - Novel Collection

Sure I had some things to say about the pacing and writing, to be honest. The grammar can be better but I like the dark style you're going for. Certainly good but hey there's always room for improvement. As for the pacing, there could be less movement description but since it's webnovel sometimes authors add more movement description as a way to reach the word quota. Over all still nice solid 4.6

Hello readers, a reading scout here. This is certainly a good read, writing quality is good with no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Story development is smooth and pacing is what keeps me reading. Characters are well fleshed out but need more depth and I'm sure they'll get more in the future as the story progresses. As for the world background it is still too early to tell so I'll let the time do the deed. A very good read indeed, give it a try. Cheers!

Writing Quality: The writing is good paragpraphing wise and punctuation. Story Development: The pacing seems a bit fast but sometimes that can hold onto the readers attention more and helps with progression. Character Design: The characters are well fleshed out especially Jason and they don't feel bland. Although some more background is needed to say for sure and we will probably get that later. World Background: I will say the background description and the way you portray the atmosphere can be detrimental to the story so maybe some more detail would be appreciated. Overall the story feels very interesting and draws me in even though this is not particularly my cup of tea. Enjoy this great read!💙

This was a good start to the novel but since I don't have much to go off of I will shortly summarize what I think Writing Quality: The writing quality is good but sometimes gets oveshadowed by the long dialogues, and the paragraphing can use some work other than that the punctuation is good. Stability of Updates: Still to early to tell for this but will keep myself updated with the latest chapters. Story Development: Story development feels smooth but as I said the long dialogues can be a bit rough on the story and the pacing can be easily thrown off. Character Design: Solid fleshed out characters, detailed and all. World Background: Some more detail on the worlds background would be cool but I'll leave that to time itself as there are only 8 chapters with tons of space to work on. This is definitely going to stay on the library and is a must read. Cheers!

Although this isn't normally my cup of tea it certainly manage to get my attention. It is spicy and I like it. Definitely a good read! Check it out, maybe you'll like it! Cheers!

Writing Quality: It does not fall short to other novels, no punctuation errors and good paragraphing. Stability of Updates: Update wise it is very good managing to submit 30 chaps for the amount of time it's been out. Story Development: Story development feels a bit slow in the beginning but somehow got hold of my AD/HD affected brain. Character Design: The characters do not feel shallow and have certain spice on their own. World Background: The world needs a tad bit more explaining but overall it's very good. Definitely a must read! Cheers!

This was a good recommendation, even though it is still in the works. I think this can become a great read. The writing quality was very good.. Update wise I cannot say much as this is new. Story development was smooth and felt very good to read. Although it is too early to tell potential good characters they were fleshed out very good. The description of the background was the strong point imo. Overall a very good read, I suggest giving it a solid try!

This was a good recommendation, even though it is still in the works. I think this can become a great read. The writing quality was very good but sometimes the informal speech can get tedious. Nonetheless it is still very good. Update wise I cannot say much as this is new. Story development was smooth and felt very good to read. Although it is too early to tell potential good characters they were fleshed out very good. The description of the background was the strong point imo. Overall a very good read, I suggest giving it a solid try!

Writing Quality: The writing quality is very good, in my humble opinion there are not many that put this much work into decent paragraphing and carefully placing every word. Stability of Updates: I cannot say much about the stability of updates as it is still early to tell. Story Development: The story has a very nice pace, it manages to get your attention within the first chapter and holds on to it very well. Character design: Character design wise I'd say that except the basic names the characters themselves have enough depths to be memorable. World Background: Again it is to early to tell, time can show in the process what the background is like. Until now the world feels very real and immersive. It is definitely a must read!

First of all the writing quality was very good, no punctuation errors(as far as I could tell) no grammatical ones as well. Story development was kind of off since the pace was sometimes all over the place but the the story in itself was quite interesting even though it was dramatic. Character Design and world builing were very good as well as for update stability I cannot say with this few chapter. I will be glad to read this one in the future following chapters. Cheers!