Hello_0909

2yr

Replied to Murphy_has_diff_ac

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Multiverse of Real-Life Manhwas

Anime & Comics · Murphy_has_diff_ac

Hello_0909

2yr

Commented

Nicely done author, the fanfic has potential. Also, it's great the MC has some common sense. But the only thing I hope is the MC doesn't become a loner.

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Multiverse of Real-Life Manhwas

Anime & Comics · Murphy_has_diff_ac

Hello_0909

2yr

Replied to Yogg_Sothoth_666

What do you mean, very nice? The path only leads to f*king depression.

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Multiverse of Real-Life Manhwas

Anime & Comics · Murphy_has_diff_ac

Hello_0909

2yr

Commented

Thanks, author at least this MC has some common sense. I never understood the stories where MC insults a ROB and never receives a punishment.

I still have a lot of questions about why is this lord bringing me out of my suffering but it is better to not voice my questions behind 'The Lord' so as not to offend this person. These powerful beings may eradicate my existence if I ever step out of my line.

Multiverse of Real-Life Manhwas

Anime & Comics · Murphy_has_diff_ac

Hello_0909

2yr

Replied to Daijena

Goodbye Pikachu

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Reborn as Gohan

Anime & Comics · Phoenixrd

Hello_0909

2yr

Posted

Your fanfic has potential, but you need to fix your grammar. I recommend using Grammarly to fix some of your sentences. Also, what was the point of him having a son? When he got reincarnated, he just brush it off like it was nothing.