> he could had thought probably it a unique cave but seeing this I don't know what are you trying to convey, but it is definitely not gramatically correct. Minor mistake but can be overlooked.
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Even if you're going to do it this way, please do it at the end since people will definitely confuse this with the actual story
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You can add a special author note section from the editing page
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Single short paragraphs like this should be included in another long descriptive paragraph. you have multiple long descriptions, maybe try adding the short paragraphs to them sometimes.
Duamu Shan Yu also known as Shang Gu a name given to him by parent.
Eastern · DaoistHolySwitch
Keep it going, although be mindful of mistakes.
ch 0 2 Summoning
Awakening the Ancient System
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