Good one
Eastern · Debasish_padhi
Nice storybuild up. I am guessing that there will be a gruesome plot twist that would result in a divergence of plot into two sections. i am awaiting it.
Urban · Debasish_padhi
This is good novela nd teh plot design sdesgined kkeeping twopo protagonist in mind.
Fantasy · Debasish_padhi
The progression is good. Increasing the power too suddenly would give a sense of fabrication. I just hope that there could be more stories with female counterparts with the same power levels as this.
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Eastern · Debasish_padhi