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Honestly, this magic might be a bit cliché or unnecessary, but couldn't he create a magic based on Naruto's Mystic Eyes and Sharingan? I'm not talking about strong abilities like illusions, amaterasu or susano'o, but rather an eye magic to improve your perception and your already existing ability to copy, I was reading the sharingan wiki these days and read that it is divided into two basic abilities, the "Eye of Perception" and the "Eye of Hispnotism" which are these basic abilities that give the Sharingan the ability to copy and also the great affinities with illusions, I would think it would be really cool if he managed to create his own version of the sharingan or something somewhat similar, like I even imagined something like those marks that appear on the sharingan in his version were seals since using the "sharingan" would cause a headache or something, of course that was just something I thought about while reading, and When I got to the end I decided to give my suggestion but that's it, thanks for the chapter! (Google translator)

Is this a fanfic of a real game? If so, what is the name?

It really wasn't just a sensation, this combination of the MC and the Traveler doesn't work, in this way he seems more like a secondary character and we are seeing the Traveler's story from his perspective, the story isn't bad, more honestly the drop in quality from now to before the Traveler appears is very obvious

Bro, am I the only one who thinks the protagonist is a bit left behind? Since the arrival of the Traveler, the MC seems to have stopped being the protagonist of this story, even though he does some things and does others on his own, it seems that he is becoming a follower of the true protagonist nowadays (Google Translator)

Bro, the MC seemed so intelligent in the beginning, maybe a little naive but still very intelligent, but the author decided to ignore the MC's intelligence and make him make foolish decisions, any scenario from that other than Rikiya trying to kill him this time stealthily or using Ren and Mai to control him would be completely forced and pointless

This is very confusing, I understood almost nothing in the first chapter, things seemed very disjointed, if the MC's current ability is mediocre, you couldn't put the attribute number range (PAC, SHO...) with just one number ? (in the future there will be a lot of numbers and it will make it difficult to remember the MC's status), and I have questions about the cards, are they skills? (weapons?) I only understood one of them is Chemistry, so why were there two gold cards? I didn't see the other letter (Google Translate)

It's impossible for me to say how uncomfortable I felt with this chapter, I even sighed when the first part ended

Bro, I feel like this war game is going to make you angry, it really seems like that cliché of the protagonist taking a long time to arrive and when he arrives will be when his friends are almost losing

It's a shame that Natsuki obviously won't have a twist and become an enemy, this is simply the most unbearable and irritating character in this entire story, the story gets worse by about 600% when she appears

Can anyone tell me if there will be some kind of romance with Freya? I hate her and I don't want to waste time reading something with her

Seriously, everything about Athena is boring man, her development with the MC, the development of Olympus with the MC, and now the protagonist putting the girls he already has down for one he just met is just disgusting, since Athena was introduced, I already knew I wasn't going to like her, but I didn't expect that her mere existence would make me so disgusted and the MC's attitude would be equally irritating.

Bro, sometimes I think that this MC's ability is really just the mental shield, because I'm not seeing this speed of growth in attributes (it's been three months and the MC still has them in rank C), honestly speaking to The author's idea isn't buying me, no matter how much I try to be understandable it seems like the MC is being nerfed and the family is dragging him down instead of helping him

Bro, why isn't the author explaining the obvious things right away? like why did the MC take Shinobu with him? and how does the system work? Does he only give rewards? so how will the MC get stronger since not as humans? the author is simply ignoring and posting chapter after chapter without explaining anything

the MC will be overpower it? How does this system work at danmachi levels? the guy simply received magic and a strong ability out of nowhere

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