This story desperately needs to be proofread. I apologise for my harshness but this story would be so much better if it was in readable English. Maybe ask a friend to proofread before posting?
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This story desperately needs to be proofread. I apologise for my harshness but this story would be so much better if it was in readable English. Maybe ask a friend to proofread before posting?
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Sci-fi · Sunny070204