I appreciate that this line and the follow up paragraph didn’t immediately tells us why he’s dying, it keeps up a feeling of suspense.
After all, his life was coming to an end.
Fantasy · Guiltythree
I am really liking the start of this story alread. Feels more well written compared to other beginnings of webnovels. I don’t know why just a feeling.
A frail-looking young man with pale skin and dark circles under his eyes was sitting on a rusty bench across from the police station. He was cradling a cup of coffee in his hands — not the cheap synthetic type slum rats like him had access to, but the real deal. This cup of plant-based coffee, usually available only to higher rank citizens, had cost most of his savings. But on this particular day, Sunny decided to pamper himself.
Fantasy · Guiltythree
I love how delightfully messed up the human mind can be.
He never thought this day would 'COME', but... 'I truly sympathize with all you white little snakes out there. Such cutthroat competition that even Asians would cower in fear. So many variables... Truly, the birth of a child is nothing less than a miracle!'
Fantasy · MisterImmortal
This isn’t the Us. Other countries have restrictions on the type of guns you can own.
Bai Zemin's hunting became much more efficient as he went down floor by floor.
Fantasy · XIETIAN
Finally, a man of sense.
Previously he was forced to spend fifteen points of mana to force the zombies' blood out. This kind of consumption was one he could not afford. After all, he was now leveling up fast but he knew that things would not always be so easy.
Fantasy · XIETIAN
He said the arrows came from the 2 dead zombies and that the 2 new zombies had passed the two dead ones, so it makes sense.
After spending twenty mana points, Bai Zemin used the blood of the two zombies killed by him earlier and, just as the two new zombies passed by the corpses of their kind, two arrows of red bloodshot out at full speed towards the back of the creatures' heads.
Fantasy · XIETIAN
He has his priorities straight. First survive, then flirt.
He turned around and looked at the beautiful woman cautiously. Even if she was beautiful, with all the strange things going on he didn't care.
Fantasy · XIETIAN
Maybe the Hypnosis points are just prerequisites to letting the system level up, like completeling a quest.
Hypnosys Points: 100
Urban · Kwalsky
The story gets better to me the second Sunny gets into the dream realm.
Instead, immediately after hearing the greetings of the Spell, Sunny found himself blind and drowning. As he instinctively tried to open his mouth to scream, salty water rushed inside, making him choke and twitch.
Shadow Slave
Fantasy · Guiltythree