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Replied to NamelessDandelion

Actually someone needs to write a story on webnovel about this. It would be fun lol

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Looking at his reflection in the water, he got the first clear look at his face. He had brown hair which was cut short and a sharp nose with a prominent bridge. A pointed chin and an angular jaw resulted in a face which would have been considered quite handsome back on earth. His green eyes though served to make him lean more towards the cute side, especially considering that this body was only twleve years old.

World Domination System

World Domination System

Fantasy · KillerHemboy

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Replied to lazylizard

Thank you. I know my answer to you is a bit late so sorry for that. I repeat myself again if I sound like im telling you what to do i dont meant it that way. I actually didn t read this story since i wrote my last review so if something changed and i don t know just say it and i will remove my review. I still feel like there are too many blank spaces in the story. I have many times already seen people writing hate comments to authors about things that are actually explained. What i want to say that there are people like that and umm.. sorry for this but to me there are too many of them like if st the time he was leaving the village at least there would have been something like "He looked back at the village and kept looking at it with a blank face for a while before he looked away and continued walking." or something like that would be far enough. The main reason i probably haven t questioned things is cuz the story is has been written in first person(dont even think about rewriting, thinking about it hurts). Im writing you here instead of the discord server so others that are thinking about reading this don t ask again the same questions and you don t need to answer as many questions. ... You forgot to answer about the pirate girl(you dont need to) Will the main character get some companions and will this turn into a harem?(I know there weren t any indications) Well that s it do not stop writing the story has great potential and i love the little things like explaining controlled explosion and so on.[img=recommend]

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Replied to SleepDeprivedSloth

same here

A race abandoned by everyone? Even the Heavens?

Primordial Vampire God System

Primordial Vampire God System

Fantasy · SleepDeprivedSloth

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I love this little message from the author

"I... I don't know... It felt vaguely familiar," I replied.

Bro, I'm not an Undead!

Bro, I'm not an Undead!

Fantasy · Shade_Arjuun

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Replied to Sage_OfOld

they are the best pets, they are so fun to anoy. They make such funny humanlike faces , full of anoyment. They are super cute too!!

This couldn't be happening. The cat felt real. Ves bent down and put his hands around the light metallic shell of the cat and lifted it in front of his face. The cat questioningly purred as it beheld its new owner while Ves processed its appearance.

The Mech Touch

The Mech Touch

Sci-fi · Exlor

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This couldn't be happening. The cat felt real. Ves bent down and put his hands around the light metallic shell of the cat and lifted it in front of his face. The cat questioningly purred as it beheld its new owner while Ves processed its appearance.

The Mech Touch

The Mech Touch

Sci-fi · Exlor

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According to the King James Bible-based Strong's Concordance, the original Hebrew word means "shining one, light-bearer", and the English translation given in the King James text is the Latin name for the planet Venus, "Lucifer", as it was already in the Wycliffe Bible.

So after closing her eyes to focus, she appeared in what looked like a black space where only the sword was visible in front of her. It was the only thing that made light around. Though, it was wrapped in chains. So much that she couldn't even see the appearance of the sword. 'It seems that the sword's power is sealed. Hmm, then it's probably because the sword in its full state is too strong for Kye. Well, Lightbringer isn't the calmest of the sword, so I guess that's normal.'

My Angelic System

My Angelic System

Fantasy · Karme

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does the author know how blood works underwater????

'This ba*tard. What did I even do to him to get hit like this?' Kye slowly got up, glaring at him coldly to John while cleaning the blood that was coming from his nose. 'I swear being a low-level suck!'

My Angelic System

My Angelic System

Fantasy · Karme

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Replied to ShamelessGengar

DO you know what is SCUBA. See this guys back, that s a scuba. It was said they have something to breath

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Everyone did as they were asked to. And thankfully for them, there wasn't any student who couldn't move freely under the water anymore. Still, it took them around an hour to get used to this new environment. And it was just moving, not even using their abilities or weapons.

My Angelic System

My Angelic System

Fantasy · Karme

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"Ven," Kye said as he walked and stopped right behind him. He then hugged him from behind as if he was trying to calm a beast, or like a little brother trying to calm down his big brother that was angry because someone bullied his little brother. "I don't want you to kill someone for such a thing. So please, stop now and let's hang out, I want to eat something cold" Ven turned around and saw Kye's smile. He was like a ray of big sunshine.

My Angelic System

My Angelic System

Fantasy · Karme

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*could hold* or *held*

The water sword soon lost its shape, letting Kye move freely now. The spear in his stomach was long gone now, so nothing hold him anymore.

My Angelic System

My Angelic System

Fantasy · Karme

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