Webnovel Author: Cybermage_9009

1yr

Commented

Please use quotations, I find it confusing in some parts, I can't tell what is the characters inner thoughts or the narrators or an ongoing dialog. Also I noticed you speed blitz the introduction, I'm not saying your work should be a slow burn but throwing too much information at the audience at once kinda removes the intrigue from it, I want to be surprised sometimes is all I'm saying

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Cybermage_9009

1yr

Commented

hey, love your shorts, really wish you'd post regularly, I kept waiting for a mass release or something so I'd just binge it but.... well it's good by the way, so please continue!

ch 0 5 Short story 3: The Illusion of time: Part 1

dreaming beyond life

Realistic · skyrimknight_45

Cybermage_9009

1yr

Replied to Morororo

Thanks for reading!

ch 32 Darius, The Crusher of Dreams!

The Search for Xanar

Sci-fi · Cybermage_9009

Cybermage_9009

1yr

Posted

Hey guys, the author here! Real talk for a second..... this novel is a banger, it's something that'll Stay with you for a long time, it's also my entry for the ongoing competition! I promise, this is gonna be something you'll have a good time following! Peace!

Bite Back: The Bloody Wolf Bandits

Horror · Cybermage_9009

Cybermage_9009

1yr

Posted

Author of this book, shameless review here however I've gotta do it regardless! it's a slowburn story but I promise it's worth the read! it's a fantastical adventure with mystery and Intrigue, you'll love it.

The Search for Xanar

Sci-fi · Cybermage_9009

Cybermage_9009

1yr

Commented

will there be more? I hope so!

ch 0 4 Short story 2: Fated disaster Finale

dreaming beyond life

Realistic · skyrimknight_45

Cybermage_9009

2yr

Commented

ah, so it like an anthology series? I really like those but they're rarely done right, tho so far you're doing great, how many chapters would you be releasing per week? I wanna add it to my shelf for now

ch 0 2 Short story 2: Fated disaster prt 1