Lots of grammar and spacing problems, but for me, I'd say the story's promising. Promising. Make sure to use Grammarly (even the free one's fine) or other websites for checking out the basic of formatting, capitalization, etcetera, that will help out much for it to be easy on the reader's eyes. Keep up the good work, Element. 👍
ch 0 1 Quest Failed
Fantasy · Azurian_Element
Formatting's kinda funky when writing in Inkstone. No bold, no italics, no proper spacing found in a published chapter (even though I put spaces in certain moments while writing the draft, but well...). So, yeah. Any thoughts and ideas you want to share for me to improve my craft? To better convey the thoughts, words, and so on. A work-around for me on Webnovel's, Inkstone's rather, workstation because of the nonexistence of basic formatting and difficult spacing?
ch 0 1 The Spear
Fantasy · Mad_Criminal
Yeah, it's been 1000 words per chapter. I kinda have another novel ongoing, so it's hard to keep things on a consistent and longer basis. Still, hope you'll see more of it. Thanks for the comment.
ch 0 4 Grimoire
Beast of Prey
Fantasy · Mad_Criminal