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Commented This chapter is a sign that the author is starting to get better and progress. Keep up the good work. Very nice cliffhanger!
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I came here from the authors previous works, this is a prequel so I'm expecting a lot to be explained. I will leave this review here for further support!
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If it wasn't for the improvement in the latest chapters this would have been a 3.5 at most. The author likes keeping thing in the sark sure, but you have to let the readers in on what is happening as well, other than that the story gets much better past chapter 8. Keep improving.
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This review is going to be a short one as there isn’t much to work with. I‘ll be leaving a 5 star for support and I see the vision. Just don’t mess it up author.
Rift Dweller: The Forgotten Kingdom
Fantasy · Mr_Morning_Star