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I’m so confused. How many people are there? 3 and a tiger? Or 2 and a tiger? Whose who? Aleister is a blond man with a tiger and Rowan is a 17 year old raven haired prince? I’m sure this will be cleared up as I read more, but constructive feedback to the author- really interesting story but I often get confused with who is talking or who is doing something. There isn’t enough context provided for me to correctly guess who a sentence is in reference to.
"How do you know she fell for you?" Rowan ignored the first sentence as he glanced at the seventeen-year-old boy.
Ensnaring his Dark Moon
Fantasy · Auroraaa
I may be the only one confused, but is Esme the one crying pearls? Or the aunt?
A soft glow encased her as those teardrops rolling down her cheeks turned into small pearls as they landed on her red gown.
Ensnaring his Dark Moon
Fantasy · Auroraaa
As much as I want her to stay with the Duke, I think she made the right decision. She left him in the dark and is leaving which also protects him and his family. The King would eliminate Elias’s entire dukedom to get to his sister, Esme and nephew. 😖
Marlene stood there looking at his retreating back and as soon as he was out of her sight, her legs lost strength as she fell on the ground, the dirty mud splashed on her, soiling her exquisite gown but she buried her face in her knees and soon soft sobs sounded in the vast forest.
Ensnaring his Dark Moon
Fantasy · Auroraaa
What help? Did Esme discover her powers or did someone show up that helped them?
Escaping the Castle was not easy for them and especially with her Aunt losing her powers, they could have been caught any moment if not for the help they received in that crucial moment.
Ensnaring his Dark Moon
Fantasy · Auroraaa
Wait, what? Did Esme just discover that she has red level powers and created a shield?!
Marlene stood up and held both Arlan and Esme in her arms. Gritting her teeth, she moved her fingers creating a shield atop their head but unlike before, the red glow in the shield was wavering.
Ensnaring his Dark Moon
Fantasy · Auroraaa
But whyyyyyy? How lavish…
She was silent. I continued "Today, I have one thousand wives in my harem. This is one of my greatest achievements".
The Devil In Guise
Fantasy · Ella_Dominic23
Maybe you should stop getting married and wasting everyone’s time?!!!
"I am so tired, I need to rest".
The Devil In Guise
Fantasy · Ella_Dominic23
I don’t understand why he has hundreds of wives and concubines. Who has time to get married so many times? You might only see them on your wedding night and never again. I think that would be my hope. I wouldn’t want to waste any of my time on a womanizer.
"T-Twenty.....more minutes, My king" his face was already pale with fear and there were beads of sweat forming on his forehead. I was tired of waiting at the altar. It was a tradition in Akkad that a groom get to wait for his bride at the altar for two hours before she comes.
The Devil In Guise
Fantasy · Ella_Dominic23
Dattebayo! 👍 😉
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Deadly Bargain
Fantasy · Anaise_Silverstri
Me reading all the thirsty comments… 😂
"It is your bad luck, being the wife of a man like me."
Under the Oak Tree
Fantasy · Suji Kim
A second passed by and then she felt it; the pressure of his soft lips on hers and the world suddenly ceased to exist. It was just her and him at that moment in time, nothing else and no one else.
Hellbound With You
Fantasy · KazzenlX
Alex smiled. He could see that she was dumbstruck. 'Good. I finally made her speechless for once! I would hate for her to think that she had a boring, cliche boyfriend,' he thought. He was glad that he seemed to have exceeded her expectations.
Hellbound With You
Fantasy · KazzenlX
Nice juke author
The next moment, Abi heard the fire alarm siren roar loudly inside the mansion. Her eyes opened wide but before she could move, water began to sprinkle from above.
Hellbound With You
Fantasy · KazzenlX
What’s with the ice blasting powers? Is this metaphorical or literal every time it happens? Why is no one questioning this ability? 😅
"Oh, so you're waiting until she's ripe and sweet, eh?" Xavier snickered and a cold blast of wind hit his face, so cold that he actually shivered. He then threw his hands up in surrender, mimicking the action of zipping his mouth and throwing away the key.
Hellbound With You
Fantasy · KazzenlX
She’s over here experimenting 😂🤣
Abi, who was still unaware of the torture she was putting him through, continued to explore. This time, she wrapped her hand around it and tried to push it to the left, wondering if it would spring back to the middle on its own.
Hellbound With You
Fantasy · KazzenlX
Win!!!!
Alexander stood majestically before her as he cupped her face. "We'll play after this. Now go," he said.
Hellbound With You
Fantasy · KazzenlX
Hahaha!! I knew she was going to plan a bunch of really sweet boyfriend/girlfriend type activities!! That’s just who she is. 😋
"Play a video game with me," she said and what greeted her after her words was just utter silence.
Hellbound With You
Fantasy · KazzenlX
Oh. Aleister is the young Prince and Rowan is the older man with the tiger. I had to reread several times to figure this out. At first when Rowan says “Aleister, I found him” I did not realize he was talking about the tiger. I thought Rowan was talking to another guard (or whatever) that he finally found the Prince.
"How do you know she fell for you?" Rowan ignored the first sentence as he glanced at the seventeen-year-old boy.
Ensnaring his Dark Moon
Fantasy · Auroraaa