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I've never been so disappointed, I love it where there's a mix of anime. Comedy, romance, these are elements that when they are well written are incredible but... FUCKING NTR, this made my desire to read completely drop. Well for people who like ntr (if there is anyone crazy for that) you will like the first chapters.

NEVER has a synopsis fooled me so much, REALISTIC was what caught my attention, but this is an r18, a child having sex, is this realism? IF YOU ARE READING THIS COMMENT, DO NOT READ THIS HORRIBLE FIC.

There are some positive and negative points in this fic: Positive: there are few good fics and even fewer that are well written, so it's been good to follow along, I'm also enjoying the writing and this mix between two worlds. Negative: Well... the mc of this fic is a subaru 2 slowly becoming Emilia's puppy, making her world revolve around Emilia, the only difference is individual strength, why is that? no creativity? there are many good things that could be the focus of the main plot, but again it all comes down to a naive and incompetent half-elf, because the MC is one of the real candidates I thought there would be a political plot with development of secondary characters, but again... .emilia this emilia that. DISAPPOINTING

My opinion Personally I love Overlord, that's because we follow the villain's story, something unusual in anime. The main element that makes overlord incredible is the yggdrasil power system (races, jobs, spells, items, worlds, guilds), Maruyama manages to give a unique characteristic to each character despite the cliches, this means that despite the huge difference in New world levels don't spoil the story. There are two things that I personally didn't like. 1- "no level limits" the MC of this story is level 1000+ that makes level max(100) nothing more than garbage, which breaks the fun of the story a lot, since it doesn't it has a good development which is normal for someone who is not a professional writer. 2- the other is obviously the waste of the "Yggdrasil System" that shows levels (def, atk, spatk...) jobs, races, that lets us know exactly how character building works, but this new system is just confusing as it's not that informative. Despite all this, congratulations author, you are improving your writing with each chapter, there are no good overlord fics, this is one of the few fun to read, so keep going :)

Honestly it's a good story... but individually I was disappointed, I expected a mixture of SEVERAL animes, but the story focuses on COTE, without developing other animes... but "Raphael" was interesting to see in a fic, despite I prefer "Ciel", after reading COTE's novel with ayanakoji as MC, seeing a COTE fic with a BETA is depressing!...

Undoubtedly one of the best One Piece fics I've ever read, but... the only thing I don't like is the MC's fruit, powers that depend on luck are boring in fics, the author could give him a normal fruit, and then develop in an intelligent way, since one of the characteristics of the mc is "intelligence".

My humble opinion. In most fics I turn my brain off, so I can enjoy the stories. My opinion of this story with the brain turned off is: Very good!! With the celebration on: Too bad. -No character development -No development with girls -Very powerful, but does not use even 1% ... .. . I love fics where there are several girls from other animes in one world, but this fic is disappointing, the MC meets the girl two seconds later she is already in love with him, where is the development? this looks like a brainwashing. It would be a much better story if the MC only had 1% of these powers and exploited them better, the MC has a system where he can get practically any skill, but he acts like an idiot, honestly this is pathetic. Anyway congratulations, it's not easy to think and write stories, keep moving forward and improving :D