MissaLeigh - Profile

I really, really want to love this story and for the most part I honestly do. The story is well written, the world and background is awesomely developed and the plot so far is interesting with a few minor draw backs, the characters are mostly well written, however... The FL is literally written like she's a moron, she's got an awesome background and character building.. but every choice she makes screams "dumb". X, y, z important fact had been revealed! FL, let me tell no one for no real logical reason. I get it.. attempted plot building but making her appear soooo weak minded, hurts to read after awhile. Then gripe 2 is it's turning into the typical, ML1 is a self serving, arrogant asshole who thinks everything is owed to him on a platter, treats FL like trash, she gets a better option of ML2 and then she ends up in ML1's arms in all its Stockholm syndrome glory. It'd be nice to see a strong FL stand by her choice for once and not accept she was treated like crap initially like it was a matter of course, especially with it not being solely a "fated bond wins" situation. I guess, it isn't the typical enemy to lovers kind of trope though completely, which is why I so wish to see her end up with the better ML. I intend to keep reading because like I said there's so much else that's good about the story, I just hope to see more character growth and pray that it doesn't stay the course of the stereotypical abandoned second male lead. Fingers crossed! Sorry author, it's a good story though!

I started reading this book and absolutely fell in love with it. Although frustrated by the FL a little, I loved the way the author built the characters and the world. I'm just sad it hasn't been updated in months and leaves a complete cliff hanger, I hope the author finishes it. ♥️

I just recently started reading books by this author but every book so far has had me enthralled, this one being no exception!

Mauve is a little frustrating as a character but you end up getting drawn in to the whole story, even if the FL makes your want to rip your hair out. 😂 Story is a great find and do recommend reading. ♥️

Kind of adore this book. Right amount of drama and sultriness with some action and an interesting plot. It's also mostly well written with fewer grammatical/spelling mistakes.. a couple name switches but overall nothing large enough to cause me to second guess what I'm reading. Over all: ♥️♥️♥️♥️♥️

I really like this story so far, at least the amount I can understand. The extreme amount misspellings and grammatical errors make it hard to know if I’m understanding it correctly since I’m having to make guesses often. It makes it really hard to see worth spending coins to unlock chapters. So reader beware, it’s good but reminds me of a bad MTL translation of my favorite comic.