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ALonelyDaoist

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A lonely daoist striving for benefits.

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Oh no bro, imagine Star Constellation, but with Pillar men's body.

"Hmph, this is considered light compared to what you've done," she smirked at the thought of Fang Yuan being a female.

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Book&Literature · zulbucks

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Hello there my fellow brothers, who seek to prolong and expand their journey in the Gu World. 1. Let's start with 'Writing Quality'. This aspect of the story is done really well. Style of writing is similar to RI and in my opinion it's a great advantage of this fic, since you can feel that progression of story takes place in the same cold, unforgiving and so familiar to us world of RI. Though it must be said, tha author didn't just tried to imitate Gu Zhen Ren's style, but added his own touch to it. (Yes, there were few moments in the story, which maybe could have been done better, but it doesn't really affect whole work + It's not very critical). 2. To be short about updates: they're on time and stable. 3. Frankly speaking, 37 chapters is miniscule amount of content (drop in ocean to be exact), if we want to draw accurate and not shallow conclusion. But considering a tempo of events happening along the way, I'll allow myself to say that development of a story is great. 4. I think design of characters is done pretty good, but when again to truly see their depth and make final say about them, we'd need to wait a liitle bit more, still this part of the story is solid and actions of characters are logical and don't contradict with their personalities. 5. World buiding is done well, even considering pace of the story, style of writing allows author to create a beautiful background along with a complicated polical situation within a clan. In the end, I want to say: Good job! The fic isn't stupidly made and story has enougth potential to truly bloom and to become amazing tale to read and enjoy. Really enjoyed this story so far and I'll will be waiting for more.

ALonelyDaoist
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Logical move from immortal

"I don't know. If I knew, my memory would be sealed as well. Maybe they want us to forget the trauma. Maybe you saw something you shouldn't have. That's all I can think of." - Zhao Min said with a disheartened expression.

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Book&Literature · ThunderTaters

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I'm afraid heaven path would be needed for this feat as well or maybe not

"The conversion rate is worse than with a regular aperture. I need at least twice the primeval stones for a given amount of essence. Add on the fact that I need to source all of my essence from stones..."

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Book&Literature · ThunderTaters

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If I remember correctly, tatoos killer moves do in fact require primodial essence (small amount), only after attaining supreme-grandmaster attainment in path can you make killer moves function without essence (infinitely)

"It was truly a good decision to recruit Jin Ju, he has helped me refine this fake aperture! With this, I can finally store gu worms and primeval essence. My possibilities are slowly opening up, I can see the path forward."

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Reverend Insanity - Verdant Heart Seed

Book&Literature · ThunderTaters

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Commented

Rank B is an investment? Even in cope of abundant human qi, it is still too much, imo to involve yourself and have burden of sharing resourses

The young man was Bao Zhi of course. He was keeping a watchful eye on his investment, tailing Jin Ju in secret. He stepped forward from the background of people. He could not let Jin Ju get robbed like this.

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Book&Literature · ThunderTaters

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Probably should have killed him as well, less burden on resources. Well, it is confirmed, he isn't a Fang Yuan. Not everyone can have true demon heart.

"My biggest immediate problem is securing a steady flow of resources. With the two of us cultivating we will live up the savings of Xing Zan quite quickly. While I figure out a better solution, I can just sell some mortal inheritances under a false name or anonymously."

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Book&Literature · ThunderTaters

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bruh

"Sister, this Jin Ju is such a player. He did not show it, but I felt his crotch when I hugged him, I think he has feelings for me."

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Book&Literature · ThunderTaters

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ALonelyDaoist
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Okay, so basically he partially starting to touch (or at least his assumption touch) profundity of refining path (killer moves are incomplete gu recipes, same applies to dao domains). But then again he isn't fully correct about 'killer moves' of desolate/ancient/immemorial beasts, according to my understanding beasts to need gu to form killer moves, at least not 'natural'

Bao Zhi felt like he had uncovered a long-forgotten history as he suddenly exclaimed: "Body cultivation! Desolate beasts! They naturally have dao marks on their bodies granting them different abilities. They do not need Gu worms to form these killer moves, because they already have the dao marks in the arrangement of a killer move!"

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Book&Literature · ThunderTaters

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Commented

Wait..he was this poor, not having even a horse to pull his cart.

"Drink up, you have five minutes to rest. When the five minutes are up, it is your turn to show your sincerity and pull this cart."

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Book&Literature · ThunderTaters

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Knowning a usual attitude clans and even more superclans have regarding mortals, it seems aftermath of tribulation was pretty horrible (not considering broken formation and grotto-heaven)

"Chi Ping, in this grotto there are no outsiders to speak of. They have lived here for many hundreds of years. A branch family is still our family. As for where the resources will go? Only the most talented will deserve our true backing, this will be unchanged."

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Book&Literature · ThunderTaters

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