what?
um...did someone forget to imput the money amounts here?
"Ding, your bank card with the tail number 3831 has been credited with $0.00 and currently has a balance of $0.00."
Games · Daoisto7TQwQ
ok so I'm still trying to figure out if the copy/replica here is just a mistranslation of field boss or something else. it keeps coming up so it gradually got me confused.
"I instead have some hope that he won't be able to beat the replica ... tsk, I really want to see his expression after being brutally beaten."
Games · Daoisto7TQwQ
thought it was 10 billion. the novel title as well as the last chapter suggest such.
But Su Yu had one hundred billion spiritual energy coins! There was nothing money couldn't solve.
Games · Dull Fireball
ok no problem. I wish you all the best.[img=recommend]
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Fantasy · GreatDaoofspace
not trying to sound offensive, but it looks like you could use an english editor or proof reader. I get that it is hard to find a good one, but it's just a thought. the only hiccups in your story look like either translation problems or grammar issues. otherwise your story is awesome and fun.
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Fantasy · GreatDaoofspace
thought the plan was for Ent to fight the walking strawberry? here it says the cocoa bean.
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Fantasy · GreatDaoofspace
thank you.
nice. [img=recommend] at least now I don't feel like it's a translation error.
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Fantasy · GreatDaoofspace
so is this confirmation that the MC is gay? Not that I mind, just curious.
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Fantasy · GreatDaoofspace
gun?
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Fantasy · GreatDaoofspace
you forgot some zeros.
After killing 50,000 burrow monsters at the burrow passage, Qin Feng's merit score reached 35 points.
Games · ShadowLord789
so far the only problem I have with this novel is the excessive switch from third-person to first-person perspectives and back again.
Looking up, I saw a little girl with a huge rucksack, using both hands and feet, climbing on a big tree.
Games · ShadowLord789
I'm hoping that was supposed to be "hopes" not "holes".
"We're placing our holes in you two, don't let us down." Gideon and Victoria looked deeply at each other before smiling as well.
Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986
wasn't this 750 a chapter or 2 ago?
so is green "rare" or "uncommon"?
From the defense of Darkstone campaign, the haul included 1,733 white common-grade equipment pieces, 566 green rare-grade items, 227 blue unique-grade ones, and a staggering 17 purple epic-grade equipment pieces!
Fantasy · Steamed_Soup_Dumpl
no problem. just trying to help
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Fantasy · Oleanderr0
fair enough. they never seem to exist when they could really help with immersion.
But Su Yu had one hundred billion spiritual energy coins! There was nothing money couldn't solve.
Global Game: Ten Billion Spirit Energy Coins From The Start
Games · Dull Fireball